Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In contemporary society, people involve to find many ways to overcome their various problems. As more and more advances have been done in various fields, people have more problems and challenges, so relationships and friendships rise to be a popular topic. Most people believe that old friends are so useful and important, whereas some people assume that making new friends and new relationship with others is more important and it should care about it. From, my prospective, keeping old friends are more important to some extent, but it should be mentioned that making new friends also is important. Let me elaborate further below.
First and foremost, old friends is more important than we can imagine. Old friends who know us and they familiarize with several aspects of our characterizations and features. They know their friends even better than themselves. Since they spent many times together, they realize each other very well. Take myself as an example. I have a friend with the name David that we are together from high school and after 20 years, we can predict our behaviors correctly in different situations. For example, last weekend he invited me for dinner and when I went to his home, I found that he cooked my favorite food. Can you believe it! Therefore, maintenance old friend is so viral and crucial.
In addition, old friends rely to each other, so they will be so useful during hard situations. As you know, it takes time to create a trustful friendship. Two persons do not trust to each other immediately and they examine each other carefully. Indeed, making great friends not only needs time but also it needs many costs. For instance, my brother has a friend that he is so valuable for my brother because he saved my brother in hard situations. Few years ago, my brother bankrupted and he did not have anything, but his friend sold his home to help and assist my brother. If he did not trust and rely to my brother, he never does it.
On the other hand, people should pay attention that they require friends in various categories they need friends regarding their ages, their job and etc. Imagine that when you were in school, you needed to be friend with your classmates and now you should be friended with your colleagues. Inasmuch as people in their relationship with other learn many things, it is better to make new friends. For example, I have been with a doctor recently that every time that I visit him, he gives me outstanding suggestions to reduce my weight and I am so eager and enthusiastic to do it.
In a nutshell, old friends are more important than new ones and it is indispensable to keep and maintain them as closer that it is possible. One should not neglect that people must to see another sit. Making new friends should be done as well as keeping old friends. I always advice my children to do above procedure and I hope they will do my advice if they care it!
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 146, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...friends regarding their ages, their job and etc. Imagine that when you were in school, y...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ble. One should not neglect that people must to see another sit. Making new friends sho...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: PRP_RB_NO_VB[1]
Message: Are you missing a verb?
... done as well as keeping old friends. I always advice my children to do above procedure and I...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'you know', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.179577464789 0.229887763892 78% => OK
Verbs: 0.167253521127 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109154929577 0.0866891130778 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.068661971831 0.046263068375 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.135563380282 0.0685040099705 198% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.100352112676 0.118717715034 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0246478873239 0.0351676179071 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59119609509 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0299295774648 0.0309702414327 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0299295774648 0.0887237588012 34% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0211267605634 0.0209618222197 101% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00528169014085 0.0139019557991 38% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2912.0 2387.08602151 122% => OK
No of words: 511.0 408.028673835 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69863013699 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75450408675 4.48200974243 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3228962818 0.338922669872 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.228962818004 0.251872472559 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.138943248532 0.174417080927 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0958904109589 0.112833075102 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59119609509 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477495107632 0.524397521467 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.6739352747 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6684587814 140% => OK
Sentence length: 17.6206896552 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1452496644 48.84282405 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.413793103 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6206896552 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.551724137931 0.644075263715 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 40.5169714556 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 0.81990521327 1.45489161554 56% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399054647889 0.300154397459 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.095630254942 0.103427244359 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.122495658561 0.0752933317313 163% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.410255362847 0.497263757937 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152235336901 0.151897553556 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128098528905 0.114077575197 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919406963976 0.0781384742642 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310637962258 0.336927656856 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0265218507255 0.067059652881 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279769125914 0.210909579961 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696549258919 0.0618886996521 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8870967742 193% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 22.0 8.42114695341 261% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 24.0 13.6433691756 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.