Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that keeping old friends is more important than making new friends, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree agree with this idea. Also, those opponent could provide us with strong purposes to support their point of view. I believe that making new friend is very important. This short essay will demonstrate some point regarding my point of view.
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that we get new experience in each friendship that we make. The people are different in many things. So, we have to learn how to be flexible with each type of people that we meet in our life. So, when we make new friendship we increase our ability to communicate and enjoying our time with everyone we came in touch with. While keeping our relation with the people whom we know, will make our life very boring if they were not around us. for instance, friends from different culture will help us to know about how people in different cities live and. eventually, we will learn new things that we did not know before because these things are not available in our country
Another reason why I advocate that making new friendship is important. We can learn new things from the people that we meet. So, making new friendship will increase our knowledge and experience in life. Additionally, they may help us to get good chance for instance getting a good job. Eventually, this will help us to detect the good people whom can be consider real friends. and never cheat be bad people
Finally, it is a well-establish fact that sometimes we have to change our city and travel to different cities. If we are used to making new friendship, we will not worry about that. Eventually, we will enjoy our new life and feeling excited about that. And this will make us more flexible to the life's chance and make us more durable to any new situation.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people who hold the opposite opinion may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Eventually
...ow people in different cities live and. eventually, we will learn new things that we did n...
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Suggestion: And
...ople whom can be consider real friends. and never cheat be bad people Finally, i...
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Suggestion:
...establish fact that sometimes we have to change our city and travel to different ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63427109974 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36613392538 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473145780051 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1283286896 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2857142857 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.619047619 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185032049567 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713419620253 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755849046565 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11525371286 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869273048401 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.