No one can deny that there are both the negative and positive of the statement that which is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. If I were asked to choose, I would definitely suggest that maintain relationship with people whom you are in contact with, is more important. It is my firm belief that better to have less friends than individual who have stabbed at your back for a number of reasons and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with, people who knows you from long time are soon becoming the family. These are the people whom not just you but your own family have trust. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. You see, when I am in school. In the whole class, one is my best friend. We eat together, study combined and live at each other house. My parents trust her more than me. She is more like my family. My parents used to meet her parents. This develops a bond not between us but also between family. For this reason, we know someone from childhood more easily we live with them.
Secondly, with time an attachment is develop between us. We share emotions, feeling, love, food which provide strength between us. Drawing from my own incidents, when I am in college, I work in project with my colleague. Professional bond is develop between us. We work together to complete the project. At the end, I have realized that spending time with them make me more comfortable. For this reason, compatibility is also necessary between friendship.
Furthermore, from all episode of my life suggest that making friend is good but you can't become ease to get thing. Better to have few friends than to have friend with sick mentality or poison in mouth. It is certainly clear to see that less friends happy me.
In the light of above mentioned discussion. I strongly believe that few reliable, trustworthy, honest, lovable friend makes your life full of happiness. I am going to end my anecdote with the most famous quote "old is gold".
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- TPO-03 - Independent Writing TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 349, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun friends is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...t is my firm belief that better to have less friends than individual who have stabbe...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
... Secondly, with time an attachment is develop between us. We share emotions, feeling,...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...gest that making friend is good but you cant become ease to get thing. Better to hav...
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Line 7, column 156, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'friended'.
Suggestion: friended
...Better to have few friends than to have friend with sick mentality or poison in mouth....
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Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun friends is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...outh. It is certainly clear to see that less friends happy me. In the light of a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64769647696 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51942752904 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547425474255 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9161104022 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5185185185 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.45110844103 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240025741237 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620118217524 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651907547892 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148245546998 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783843236798 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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