Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Like today is more comfortable than it was when you grandparents were children
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I think today’s life has been easier and soft to live than a couple years ago. Definitely, technology has an important role on this progress, which made life better. Currently, most part of us do not be able to realize this, but likely our grandparents would be. Usual activities like, a traveling, a communication using mobile phone or even the internet can be use to talk with someone that live in the other side of the world.
Always when I have an opportunity, I like to talk with my grandmother about how everything was fifty years ago. I ask her with she notes a big difference, and she always surprise myself with a great tale about your childhood. For example, my brother live in Portugal and last year we take a trip to visit him. We went to the airport, took the plane and in few hours we could arrived in Portugal. My grandma was impressed because we travel far and quickly. She told me about how much time she spend when she was a child just to move from a small city that she lives to a capital city.
Nowadays, we have an accessible tool, which is the internet, that make everything easier. We can communicate with anyone around the world, learning everything, solve financial problems, watching movies and listening to music to have fun and a bunch of other things. For instance, when my grandfather met my grandmother, and he was moved to another city to work, they could communicate just by letters. Which demanded so much time and patience, because sometimes it could take almost a month to receive a letter.
In conclusion, I feel that we current evolve to make everything easier in our lives. It is impressive how we change a lot of things in a few time. Actually I am happy because my grandparents are still alive to look at and live all of it.
- Many people welcome the opening of shopping areas near their homes. On the other hand, some people are strongly opposed to the construction of such facilities. If the opening of a large shopping center in your neighborhood were announced, would you supp 71
- Many people welcome the opening of shopping areas near their homes. On the other hand, some people are strongly opposed to the construction of such facilities. If the opening of a large shopping center in your neighborhood were announced, would you supp 63
- Your city has decided to build a monument to honor a famous person in your country. Whom would you choose. Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice. 3
- The prompt: 1. Some people think that parents should plan their children’s leisure time carefully. Other people believe? those children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time, Which idea do you agree with?Give reasons for your choice. 88
- People have a lot of opinions about the value of advanced education. Which do you think is the most important reason to attend college or university? Use reasons and examples to support your answer. 1. new experiences, 2. career preparation, 3. increased 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: BE_USE_TO_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...obile phone or even the internet can be use to talk with someone that live in the o...
^^^
Line 1, column 368, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...obile phone or even the internet can be use to talk with someone that live in the o...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...live in the other side of the world. Always when I have an opportunity, I like to t...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'surprises'.
Suggestion: surprises
... notes a big difference, and she always surprise myself with a great tale about your chi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'arrive'
Suggestion: arrive
...ook the plane and in few hours we could arrived in Portugal. My grandma was impressed b...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
...ly. She told me about how much time she spend when she was a child just to move from ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 585, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... city that she lives to a capital city. Nowadays, we have an accessible tool, wh...
^^^^
Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd he was moved to another city to work, they could communicate just by letters. ...
^^
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...sive how we change a lot of things in a few time. Actually I am happy because my grandpa...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, still, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55451713396 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66641190153 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601246105919 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.418373396 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8823529412 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0856478812507 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263888046554 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264384745373 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.047499928393 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224388160924 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.