There are different opinions on modern transportation technology in today's world. Some people think that modern transportation and shipping are not at all useful in human life. Other people, however, argue that it has many beneficial ways to everyone in society. I, myself, agree with the latter as it plays a significant role in human life. I feel this way for two reasons, which will explore in the following essay.
First of all, nowadays, people changing a lot of places by using transportation. For example, my cousin, who lives in India, wants to study MS in the US for better education. So, she traveled through a flight to the US which makes her an easy and safe journey. As a consequence, transportation is safe for moving to another country.
Second, other than moving places, It is also important for sudden visits or sudden meetings in another place. Take me as an example. I am working in a well-developed company where my job is to meet clients. Once, suddenly I got a client, who lives far from my company place and I need to travel from my place to his place for a meeting. So, I took a train to his place for lessening my time and safety too.
To sum up, for these reasons, moving places and for sudden plans, transportation makes life easier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, well, for example, i feel, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64285714286 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7942719973 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 618.680645161 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4198324902 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.3333333333 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164946819 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551988624772 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509550908041 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097597514127 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043588408662 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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