There are many debates for being involved in children's education among parents. Some of them think children do not need help, even do not need advanced education. However most of parents are aware of the role of education in their children's future. Therefore, they spend more time on their children's education. There are some reasons that persuade the parents to do so as follow.
First of all, people are conscious of the pivotal role of education in their children's future. Today, job become more professional and the employees are seeking for specialized persons or skilled workers. Additionally, parents know that the fastest way to have more knowledgeable children is good education. Therefore, they do their best to help the offspring learn the materials as much as possible. For instance, my father is a teacher that was always overseeing my activities from primary school to university period. I think that it was a prime contribution to me to find a decent job after graduation.
Second, parents know the value of education. they can work on the probability of success of their children with or without knowledge. Children with low literacy cannot reach the pinnacle of their careers because of lack of technical information. Most of the people can have a job only when they have noticeable education.
Last but not least, courses in the schools have been being more complicated. Hence, the parents are wanted to be involved in the children's assignments and homework by both children and authorities of schools. Issues and problems are difficult and parents have to go to the aid of their children to heighten their knowledge and provide the opportunity to go to the next steps. Not until parents help the children they cannot advance and become ready for next issue.
In conclusion, the more contribution of parents to their children's homework and assignments, the more chance of having prosperous men and women in the future.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 71
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 16
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
There are many debates for being involve...
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Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[3]
Message: Did you mean 'to help'?
Suggestion: to help
...Some of them think children do not need help, even do not need advanced education. H...
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Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...p, even do not need advanced education. However most of parents are aware of the role o...
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Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
...do not need advanced education. However most of parents are aware of the role of education in t...
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Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...sons that persuade the parents to do so as follow. First of all, people are conscious...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...d, parents know the value of education. they can work on the probability of success ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.103125 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80316332192 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.457214736 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.65 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283297258486 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959382142813 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599287644138 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175873682815 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551447199305 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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