Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do.
Doing Effective Things
Some people think that individuals lose their time doing things that makes them enjoy. Others believe that people nowadays are doing thing they out to do. This issue is a controversial one but in my own point of view, a closer examination reveals that people waste their time doing things that they are joyful for them rather than doing important things. I feel this because of two main reasons, which I will explored in the following essay.
First, individuals are less responsible than they were in the past. People, nowadays, are doing things considered not vital, such as playing football or video games. In addition, everyone in the world have critical things to do; for example, children are responsible to do homework, and adults are responsible for doing their work every day. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I can recall a memory that when I was young, I was a hard-working student so do my family. Indeed, my father was an engineer, a phenomenal one, who can handle a work of two men, but now he lost his responsibility of working as great as he was. Today, I cannot study as efficient as I used to do during childhood because I do not have the sensibility to handle being the first in my class. Hence, this reflects on my collage studying by not earning credits, and weakening my degrees.
Not only people lose their responsibility toward doing things that they should do, but they also are busy with the new technology of nowadays. Phones, laptops, TVs, and so on are the reason for the distraction that people receive while working, which makes focusing on their work impossible. By way of example, one of my best friends, Omar, was having an enormous amount of dedication, which I have not noticed on anyone. Until one day, he obtained a Nokia phone that has great features. Thus, he was ignoring and delaying all his work, which affects his career badly. Consequently, his manager hates what is going on with Omar, so he give him an opportunity to change his new habit. In reality, he warned him to finish his work as he used to do in the past. Nevertheless, he did not apply what his manager told him to do, and he continued to waste his time playing with his phone. Therefore, he was fired from his job instantaneously without even thinking. For this reason, I believe that people, these days, are not doing things that they are responsible to do; instead, they are wasting their time on achieving useless things that make them feel joyful.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above. I am of the opinion that in most cases people nowadays prefer doing things that they like to doing things that is significant. This is because people are not as responsible as they were in the past, and individuals are distracted with the new technology appears currently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, i feel, in addition, such as, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71428571429 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64412654226 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478873239437 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8654989221 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.72 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.88 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438693051382 0.236089414692 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145357597511 0.076458572812 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162060976731 0.0737576698707 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34247796819 0.150856017488 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855574330727 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.