Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Reading is more educational than watching movies or TV.
In modern life, studying is continuous work that everybody does every day. People could collect knowledge through varieties of ways such as reading book, watching movies or TV, going to presentations,.. it is argued that reading helps people more educational than watching movies or TV. From my perspective, I believe reading is the best way to studying and more educational than watching TV, of course.
Reading book is a good habit should be done often. There are many kind of books like science books, historical books, art books, romance books,.. they are very diversity. Due to that fact, people could choose whatever they want to read. These choosing might because of their favorite or their request. There are a lot of people who know benefit of reading book, they even collect enough books to have a small library in their home. How about programs on TV. What is showed on TV is arranged in a schedule and people could not decide what they watch. It is just an aspect, reading book has much more advantages than watching TV that people can think of.
Additionally, reading book allow people time. You can read a book in how long you want, you even could read one chapter, do something, read others chapter after that. It’s mean you could read books whenever you have free time. Of course, TV program is not given you like that, you only have change to see these programs one time at one certain time. More importantly, people do not have ability to understand everything in just one time. Because of that, reading books is the best way to study something new. People could read a book several times until they understand it completely. It is also the reasons why schools choose books is major vehicle for their students to study. In all, reading book helps people know more deeply about world.
In conclusion, I want to remind about the benefit of reading books with education. Some people could say that reading book is an old way just for elderly. However, in my opinion, reading book is need to be done for every people. Even young people should read book more than old people because reading books help young people have nice soul and good knowledge to go into life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in conclusion, kind of, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 382.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73036649215 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33499782689 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486910994764 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4104320702 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260720238786 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916869136615 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095648439077 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193264087594 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912354770595 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.44 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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