Todays, the lives are very complicated and people are so busy. Some of them believe that they can do many different things, while others disagree. From my estimation, I think that doing a few thing well may be better compared to doing various things because a few things have well done possibility, fasting work may be inaccurate and increasing self-confident by doing all things well.
To begin with, Nowadays people are so busy in distinct aspects and so they do not have enough time to spend on various field. Many of them prefer to fulfill their work well. This point may support the issue that the chance of doing well will be decrease by choosing perform some things simultaneously. Therefore, If someone tries to do many different things, He or she must not expect to handle everything well.
Admittedly, In many situations accuracy can be sacrificed for speed and number of things which they need to be done. According to the psychologist, human's brain manages our plan and force body for executing determined things. Besides, They believe that, when people try to do different things their accuracy decline immediately and it will lead to the incomplete work. Take a boss in a large company as an example. In that responsible in this status he cannot do many different things at the same time while he can do a few things with high level of accuracy. Hence, the accuracy have not to be devoted for number and amount of works.
Finally, Self-confident can be mentioned as a key point in flourishing human characteristic. People can promote their self-confident by doing various things well. When they decide to do every things, provided their work not to be done correctly, they may feel worthless. For instance, When I was a student in the university sometimes attempted to do every things at the same time therefore I always was so busy due to having incomplete works and after a while my self-confident had been decreased. Consequently, the fulfilled works have a profound impact on human self confident incredibly and doing many various things may distort self confident.
In sum, due to aforementioned reasons, I strongly believe that in complicated new world, Compared to doing many things simultaneously, doing a few things well will be better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
.... Some of them believe that they can do many different things, while others disagree. From my ...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to perform'
Suggestion: to perform
...doing well will be decrease by choosing perform some things simultaneously. Therefore, ...
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Line 3, column 337, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...usly. Therefore, If someone tries to do many different things, He or she must not expect to ha...
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Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'situations'' or 'situation's'?
Suggestion: situations'; situation's
...everything well. Admittedly, In many situations accuracy can be sacrificed for speed an...
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Line 5, column 464, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...responsible in this status he cannot do many different things at the same time while he can do...
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Line 7, column 393, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'was'.
Suggestion: was always
...ery things at the same time therefore I always was so busy due to having incomplete works ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, finally, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1893.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 381.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96850393701 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89158331297 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490813648294 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 582.3 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1090376092 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6315789474 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0526315789 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388293451726 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135280084853 0.076458572812 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879990364942 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272702432276 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724832138748 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.