People have changed in the last few decades and they turn to be busy doing many things and not focusing very well in a specific thing. Personally, I totally agree that people do very few things well when they have a lot of things to do. I feel this way because of three reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
In order to keep up with this life, people have to work in different jobs to make a living. Therefore, they do not focus very well on the job because they think about the second shift or job. My experience is a good compelling example. Currently, I work in two different jobs. The first job is a pharmacist and the second is a chief. When I go to work in my pharmacy, I think about the different needs for my restaurant such as ingredients, recipes, and the customer. As a result, one time I did a medication error. Luckily, it was near miss which means that the patient did not get the harm. As you can see, doing many things in one day could kill people because you are not doing it very well.
Moreover, with every generation, life has become more complicated and busier. Time plays a major role in our life and with social media, we do not focus on our jobs. A good example is driving. The major cause of accidents is using phones. A lot of people use their phones during driving. They call, use navigation, watch a soccer game, and chat. For sure they will not drive very well or focus. As a result, they hurt themselves or others.
Frankly speaking, some people do perfectly if they have more than one thing to do. However, these people are rare and most of them are women because they can do multiple tasks in one time. Generally speaking, people need to focus on one task so they do it perfectly.
All in all, I strongly agree that because people do many things at one time, they do very few things very well. This is mainly because they will not focus on the job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e tasks in one time. Generally speaking, people need to focus on one task so they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, frankly, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, i feel, i think, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34078212291 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2816903647 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488826815642 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3148426569 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.16 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.32 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457822548375 0.236089414692 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120740936281 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134002522839 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293951846197 0.150856017488 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103619335809 0.0645574589148 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 11.7677419355 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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