Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to schoolwork. Which of the two approaches do you prefer?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Working parents usually have to manage their lifestyles to spend time with their family. Many people believe that many working parents do not have time to spend with their children, but some parents might have to work because of economic situations or some mothers continue to work to not give up their passion. In my opinion, busy parents should not only focus on one specific thing like just studying or play games, rather should be more indulged into both the activities but, can spent more time in other activities like playing games often. I would like to give few reasons in support of my answer in the following essay.
To begin with, we live in a modern era where most of the children are independent and do not want their parents to focus much on their academic or other activities. Most of the children often try to complete or do their schoolwork by themselves. Parents who usually get less time to spend with their children should be more interested or support their child's interests. Mostly parents should enjoy doing different sports, other activities with their children which not only entertains them but they will be more interactive with each other. For instance, my brother and his wife both are working and they have one girl. She is eight years old and they usually send her to day-care as they both are busy. While my brother comes back home, he picks her up in the afternoon. Most of the time she spends without them so many she feels lonely. In order to not make her feel bad, they take her to her dance classes on alternate days, where she enjoys with her friends. Moreover, after my brother and his wife return from work they take her to the park or the swimming pool in their society where she plays with her friends and does not get bored. This Not only makes her more active by doing different activities like swimming, dancing, playing different sports but , also she does not feel lonely. In this way they try to keep both their work and her daughter at level so that they do not have problem.
Second point worth considering is that, nobody knows or think of their child's betterment other than their parents. Working parents try to make use of their spare time to balance their personal lives with their work. At present day, children feel neglected when they are not being focused on. Interaction among the parents and their children is the most important thing to keep up the bond of love , trust and generosity among the child and their parents. Interaction not only increases trust but also discussing each other's problems, their child's day at school will make a connection between them. For example, my neighbor is a single mother and she has two kids. to earn her living and for her kids she has t work for long hours. Although she has a kept a full time woman at her house to take care of the children after they come back from school but, the children at the end of the day want to see their parents. When she comes back from her she likes to spend time with them. She takes them to the community center to play with other kids, on weekends they go to watch movies, or other sports . This makes a source of interaction as she likes to discuss about their school, share their problems with her. They not only feel confident but also loves her more because f the way she tries to manage everything together.
To conclude, busy parents should spent time with their children in playing sports, or doing other activities to main the trust , keep interaction and he connection between each other for a stronger bond.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 90.0 43.0788530466 209% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 97.0 52.1666666667 186% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2916.0 1977.66487455 147% => OK
No of words: 634.0 407.700716846 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59936908517 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01790360848 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22873651157 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.42429022082 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 867.6 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0526907365 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.551724138 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8620689655 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41379310345 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297425960088 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960808511531 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858126823152 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237962859179 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661338777722 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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