It is tempting to think that the price of technological devices will fall shortly after they are available, hence waiting instead of buying them right away will be a wiser choice. Nevertheless, from my perspective, the experience of having the latest digital products is incomparable, so that it is better to own them as soon as they are released.
On the one hand, if one chooses to wait every time he or she is considering buying a new device, then the chance is high that one will always end up using out-of-date products and missing the opportunity to experience a better and easier life. Apple company, for instance, will have product launches to release their new creations every September. Generally, the price of a new version of the iPhone will not fall until another generation is created, which means one could gain a discount only when he or she is willing to use the old iPhones. The benefits that come from the improvement of design or the advancement of technology are not available for people who always wait.
On the other hand, waiting could not only cause one to miss the superior and smoother experience of the new device, but also cause one to have a worse experience of using the old equipment. It is commonly acknowledged that, apart from the hardware, the software of a device is also essential to the user's experience. As the hardware is continually being updated, the software will have many adjustments to suit these changes, as well. As a result, the old device will not work as perfect it used to be due to the new software. For example, Google Chrome forces its' users to update to more original versions occasionally. Unfortunately, my old computer is too primitive to support these changes, resulting in frequently breaking out when I was reading a web page. Eventually, I compromised and decided to buy a new computer. Nonetheless, the time and energy that I spent on dealing with these bugs and delays could be saved if I resolutely updated my equipment a few months ago.
Admittedly, sticking to old digital devices will save money. However, with the help of insurance products such as Apple care plus, which could help you update your iPhone with low prices or even free every year, now it is possible to buy products that are both new and cheap.
In a nutshell, it is more beneficial and smarter to purchase digital products once a new version is available to the market than waiting. Nowadays, people could have better user experience at a relatively low price and do not need to worry about the flaws of old products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, then, well, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2123.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77078651685 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7456646572 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516853932584 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1783099836 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.944444444 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7222222222 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162831007351 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493948334656 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389010855371 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953179767117 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190674717907 0.0645574589148 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.