Teaching is the greatest gift and ability which is given to some people and my personal opinion is that teachers must be appreciated more than enough. However, as far as I observed, teachers nowadays are not being respected worse, their job is seen as a childs toy. Unfortunately, I agree with the statement that teachers are not appreciated today and my reasons will be explained in this essay.
First of all, the number of educated people was not high in the past thus, there was not many teachers and that is why they were more valuable. Furthermore, there was not many teachers and schools in every city so, if an individual wants to study and learn he/she had to move to another city for his/her education goals. That is why, every single teacher were seem as a tresure and treated very well to keep them around and make them feel loved.
Second, with the increase of the number of the universities, now many people are able to study teaching. That created some problems. For instance, now it is easier to graduate from a university and find a teaching job because, it is only depends on money circulation. However, teaching was a job because of eager and dedication that was the reason that the teachers were more qualified in their proffessions. But today, many teachers only go to school, sign papers, not interested in students and go back home. They lost theit idealist opinions and become self centered, careless workers. Hence, the respect, love and appreciation to them vanished away in time.
Third, the salary phenomena became a measurement and the amount of the salary determines the value of a person. Sadly, teachers do not get the payment they deserved and many of them try to live in low standards since they have many responsibilities. Many people decides the worth of others by comparing their incomes. This order will not seem to change so I assume that the appreciation and respect to the teachers will get lower and lower in the future.
As a conclusion, teachers should have been treated better however, our people and our world do not show the required gratefulness to them. In order to make a difference, we should show our respect and love.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ty which is given to some people and my personal opinion is that teachers must be appreciated mo...
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Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...oals. That is why, every single teacher were seem as a tresure and treated very well...
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Line 2, column 360, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
... That is why, every single teacher were seem as a tresure and treated very well to k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, third, thus, well, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76657824934 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64602919393 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527851458886 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7991472995 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5789473684 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1894845569 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053272795261 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520330680489 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10045270624 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436211073673 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25 Out of 30
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