Friends are very important in our lives. Sometimes our friends are more close to us rather than our family members. Some people may believe that the ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily, others may disagree. Even though some people might find the ability to make many new friends better because they could have a large group of friends, in my view a small group of close friends over a long time is far more important for two important reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, a lot of people are close to us when we have no problem. In other words, when we have a problem or difficulty, it is more likely that just a few numbers of our friends help us. My experience is a compelling example of this. When I was a Bachelor student, I have a large group of friends. I had eight roommates that were my friends. We spend a lot of time together. We went out camping, shopping etc. but just one of them was close to me. She was my classmate too. After one year from the time that we were friends, I had to change my room in the dormitory. My new roommates had different personality traits and I could not make new friends. I felt alone and was really depressed. My close friend who was my classmate changed her room just for me. She is my best friend now and we had a lot of good times together. The experience thought me that it just our close friends stay with us in hard situations.
Furthermore, we could satisfy our friend better when we have a small group of friends. People have different interests. Each person lives in a way different from others. It is unlikely that we could find a friend who is similar to us. As a result, managing a large group of friends with different interests is really hard. Again my experience illustrates the value of this. As I mentioned above, I had a number of friends with different interests when I was a bachelor student. Whenever that we want to go out, we had an argument about the place that we wanted to go. Some of my friends liked to go to a park or beach, others liked to go to the cinema or movie theater. For this reason, most of the times, some of my friends were upset with me. As you can see, it is easier to manage a small group of friends.
To sum up, I strongly believe that a small group of close friends is better to make a lot of new friends. Not only will we have the support of a few numbers of friends in hard situations, but also we could satisfy all of them easily. Every person should have a small group of close friends who are with them in all conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...he ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period is more impor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill explain in the following essay. To begin with, a lot of people are close...
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Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ds stay with us in hard situations. Furthermore, we could satisfy our friend...
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... to manage a small group of friends. To sum up, I strongly believe that a sma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, as a result, in my view, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29783037475 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39947942022 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.390532544379 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7694513471 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.0303030303 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 11.8709677419 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288155867485 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733490397969 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104029965384 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21721432778 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165906426881 0.0645574589148 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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