Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The automobile is destroying our quality of life.
There are a lot of discussions about pollution that are caused by the automobiles. And also, the damages are provided to environment and nature, especially the greenhouse gases which is increasing the temperature of the earth. However, I disagree with this statement that the automobile is destroying our quality of life. There are good effects which are made by the automobile too.
First, the use of automobile made our life faster and because of this we can go anywhere around the world and enjoy the nature. For instance, if you have SUV car you can go to the forest and have beautiful moments. In addition, people use cars for helping others in a case that emergency happens. For example, doctors use ambulances for bringing sick people to the hospital and save their life.
Second, the automobile made our life easier. People use their personal cars to go to work and it can transport them faster. Also, we don’t need to worry about air pollution that is caused by cars. Because the new technologies improved the cars and now we electric cars which are harmless to nature such as Tesla Motors company which is founded by Elon Musk who is a brilliant entrepreneur.
Finally, we use cars for entertainment too that is very enjoyable for people around the world. There are a lot of competitions during the year in different fields like F1 and Rally. And these competitions motivate the manufacturers to produce cars with higher quality and it benefits all of the people.
In conclusion, I think the automobile is not destroying our quality of life also it is making it better too. Maybe in the near future, new cars will be produced which clean the air around us too and improve the quality of our life also helps the nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ars with higher quality and it benefits all of the people. In conclusion, I think the a...
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Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding air'?
Suggestion: the surrounding air
..., new cars will be produced which clean the air around us too and improve the quality of our life...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248502994012 0.229887763892 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.176646706587 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0419161676647 0.0866891130778 48% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0568862275449 0.046263068375 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.062874251497 0.0685040099705 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11377245509 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0449101796407 0.0351676179071 128% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67560073748 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0239520958084 0.0309702414327 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0988023952096 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0119760479042 0.0209618222197 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0269461077844 0.0139019557991 194% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1745.0 2387.08602151 73% => OK
No of words: 301.0 408.028673835 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79734219269 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318936877076 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242524916944 0.251872472559 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169435215947 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112956810631 0.112833075102 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67560073748 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504983388704 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 50.4720514409 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7058823529 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8162750791 48.84282405 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.647058824 120.699889404 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.5533526081 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.823529411765 0.644075263715 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 41.9583740473 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.37373737374 1.45489161554 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40003532743 0.300154397459 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116542248189 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0616184010147 0.0752933317313 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564259713827 0.497263757937 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137672325156 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175475137781 0.114077575197 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145678300675 0.0781384742642 186% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.311950312059 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0200323660244 0.067059652881 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272454860907 0.210909579961 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098773847903 0.0618886996521 160% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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