Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important way to improve people’s health is to clean the environment.
There are some moot points about people’s health issue. The question of what is the best way to improve people’s health has aroused as a subject of controversy among authorities.
Some people assert that cleaning the environment is an important way, others believe that producing organic foods is important. Everyone has their own zeitgeist, when it comes to my position, I strongly agree that the most significant way to ameliorate people’s health is to clean the environment. I have some reasons, two of which will be aptly explicated here-under.
The first reason worth discussing here is that the environment where we live, work and operate has a significant role in our health issue due to being most of the time of our lives in the environment have a clean surrounding is the very important matter, everyone confirms that the more neatly environment lead the more healthy people. To be more specific the clean environment makes the clean water and the fresh air, therefore have an important impact on our health.
As a case in point, I vividly remember two days ago I watched a program on the television which showed some researcher set up an experiment to clarified the impact of the clean environment on the student's intelligence. They chose two groups of students who had the same grade in intelligence test after that they put one of the groups in the clean environment and another group in the polluted area after six months scientists evaluated the student's intelligence rate. The result showed that the group which was in the clean area took a higher grade in intelligence exam.
This program competently corroborates that the idea of the clean environment has an important impact on human health, especially in younger people.
The same token, another paramount reason to be mentioned is that nowadays the number of diseases which is very chronic for humans has increased dramatically in order to these diseases scholars try to find the basis of these illnesses consequently, they establish many experiments to find the clue of these sicknesses, After too many tests they understand that one of the key factors for most diseases related to environmental pollution. Due to human activity and fossil fuels detrimental material comes to our environment and lead to many catastrophic diseases.
My own experience demonstrates this reality I have a cousin who has seven years old, Two month age he had terrible sickness which led to hospitalization for a month. His doctors could not understand the main cause of this chronic illness, thus they took too many blood test to diagnose reasons. After many tests, they understood that this disease stems from the air pollution because my uncle lives in the downtown of the city and this area teeming with too many polluted air, Therefore the doctor suggested to my uncle change his house and immigrated to the countryside. My personal experience sheds some lights on the point that the clean environment has a great impact on people's health.
In the nutshell, the environment has an important role in our healthy life. The unclean environment not only has an adverse impact on our well-being but also cause chronical diseases, therefore the government should spend too many funds on cleaning the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
... impact of the clean environment on the students intelligence. They chose two groups of ...
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Line 4, column 441, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ter six months scientists evaluated the students intelligence rate. The result showed th...
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Line 7, column 65, Rule ID: HAVE_CD_YEARS[1]
Message: This phrase is used with 'be': 'is seven years old'.
Suggestion: is seven years old
...trates this reality I have a cousin who has seven years old, Two month age he had terrible sickness...
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Line 7, column 258, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun blood seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much blood', 'a good deal of blood'.
Suggestion: much blood; a good deal of blood
...his chronic illness, thus they took too many blood test to diagnose reasons. After many te...
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Line 7, column 458, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun air seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much polluted air', 'a good deal of polluted air'.
Suggestion: much polluted air; a good deal of polluted air
...the city and this area teeming with too many polluted air, Therefore the doctor suggested to my u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.0752688172 334% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2747.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08703703704 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89866520059 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477777777778 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 849.6 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.5111944652 48.9658058833 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.578947368 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4210526316 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21052631579 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.53405017921 176% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202899306771 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789232469181 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808832347074 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115230916408 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883372319499 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.