Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Submitted by Swaggy on Wed, 07/24/2019 - 03:47

Regarding the issue of whether the rules in societies nowadays expect young people to follow and obey are too strict, different people hold divergent opinions. Some would maintain the standpoint that the regulations are indeed too strict because the phenomenon of decreasing happiness rate among young people are common. I partly agree with their notion, however, from my point of view, I contend that the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are not too strict.

Firstly, the rules in societies today for young people to obey is the aim of expecting them to improve efficiency and avoid going into the wrong ways. As a saying goes, every things has their reason to exist, so like these rules. They are come up by people who made some mistakes or went into wrong ways, so they don't expect any other people to follow it especially for young people. Young people maybe misunderstand and annoy with these rules, but they would appreciate the rules after growing up. According to a survey conducted by WuHan University in 2018, about four fifths young people in China feel the rules in societies today are not so strict and the rules help them to save time and money.

Secondly, the reason why some young people may feel the rules too strict could be they haven't obeyed any rules ago and need some time to get used to it. In childhood, almost every child have little regulations to limit their behavior, but after growing up and as a young people now, we need to obey some rules in the societies. This process is inevitable and profound for our life, it is common for young people to feel too strict when they get the rules first. However, they would get used to the rules and even feel comfortable to live with the rule. Consider my own experience which can shed some light on this issue. When I grow up as a young people, I just feel the rules like giving up my seat on bus for the elderly are too strict, whereas after several behaviors on bus I feel so proud to do that. The appreciate emotions on elderly's faces are the best reward.

Admittedly, it is undeniable that some young people feel the rules too strict so they give up the confidence to live in societies even suicide. I think every thing has two sides, if the young people can endure for a longer time or they turn to other for chatting, they would get used to the rules.

To sum up, whereas there is an argument that the regulations that societies nowadays expect young people to follow are too strict, namely reducing happiness rate among some young people, avoiding getting into wrong ways, coupled with feeling comfortable after getting used to the rules makes a strong case for the statement that the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are not too strict.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
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Suggestion: don't
...stakes or went into wrong ways, so they dont expect any other people to follow it es...
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Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...feel the rules too strict could be they havent obeyed any rules ago and need some time...
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Line 5, column 807, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...iors on bus I feel so proud to do that. The appreciate emotions on elderlys faces are the best...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, i feel, i think, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64444444444 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24801922811 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.424242424242 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0962345557 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.722222222 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367557104249 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14494467223 0.076458572812 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113291571123 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269059355342 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110283291269 0.0645574589148 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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