Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Rules, one of the important needs, that governs any societies. Along with these rules, the terms regulation always comes simultaneously. Although every societies have certain kinds of rules and regulations, many people are found to violate these rules and regulations in the societies. Personally, I believe that there is not any kinds of impedement for a young people in the society, and I am not consonant with the given statement. I feel this way for the two reasons, which explores in the following essays.
First of all, society have given provides a large boundary for the young people. They forgives the simple types of mistake which was created by the children or young people. My personal experience is a compelling evidences for this. When I was young, at the age of 12, I has theft a rupees of twenty-thousand from my neighborhood. Initially, no one knows about this incident. Later when my mother knew about this events, I felt overwrought. She has taken be to the mass of whole society gathering. I started to cry. Many of them afraid by taking me to the jail. However, being a young person, these laws and rules hinders me. In this case, if I were a adult, there is no any obstructions that they taken me to the immure. These kinds of benificiaries were provided for small types of crime to the young children. Being a children or young, many of the people has got a excuse from the minor types of crime like robbery, friends beating, etc. Similarly in home, young people have so many advantage. They does not requires to follow the rules like an adult. For instances, they should not have to wake up at early in the morning, they were first provides meal in the house. Similarly, there is a differences between young and adult. Like, when adult children done the mistakes in a family, parents would scold then. In the same case young would got a comparatively more excuse than the adult.
Secondly,young people have lot of previliges in our society. They were highly benifitted by these sorts of the facilities. It was either provided by the society or a government to them. For example--young people under ten-years old would not have to pay money in the public vehicles. When I was at ten-years old, I have travelled from cable car to visit temple. In that moment, I has to pay only half of fee as comparision to my parents.Here, my parents have saved two-hundred fifty rupee, as the total fee of cable-car was five-hundred. Morever, young people has also discount facilities in the aeroplane. Being, a young there was low demarcations.
In conclusion, I am not of the opinion of the author--illustrating that children have lot of freedom because they can get may excuses as compared to adults, and because there is lots of previliges for young people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'forgive'
Suggestion: forgive
...rge boundary for the young people. They forgives the simple types of mistake which was c...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
.... When I was young, at the age of 12, I has theft a rupees of twenty-thousand from ...
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Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a rupee' or simply 'rupees'?
Suggestion: a rupee; rupees
...as young, at the age of 12, I has theft a rupees of twenty-thousand from my neighborhood...
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Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...cident. Later when my mother knew about this events, I felt overwrought. She has tak...
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Line 5, column 651, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...les hinders me. In this case, if I were a adult, there is no any obstructions tha...
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Line 5, column 669, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... this case, if I were a adult, there is no any obstructions that they taken me to ...
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Line 5, column 711, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... any obstructions that they taken me to the immure. These kinds of benificiaries were prov...
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Line 5, column 820, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...s of crime to the young children. Being a children or young, many of the people has got a ...
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Line 5, column 868, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...en or young, many of the people has got a excuse from the minor types of crime li...
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Line 5, column 983, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...Similarly in home, young people have so many advantage. They does not requires to follow the r...
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Line 5, column 1004, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...ung people have so many advantage. They does not requires to follow the rules like a...
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Line 5, column 1013, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'require'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: require
...e have so many advantage. They does not requires to follow the rules like an adult. For ...
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Line 5, column 1013, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...e have so many advantage. They does not requires to follow the rules like an adult. For ...
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Line 5, column 1022, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'following'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: following
... many advantage. They does not requires to follow the rules like an adult. For instances,...
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Line 5, column 1184, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are a differences'?
Suggestion: there are a differences
... provides meal in the house. Similarly, there is a differences between young and adult. Like, when adu...
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Line 5, column 1193, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a difference' or simply 'differences'?
Suggestion: a difference; differences
... meal in the house. Similarly, there is a differences between young and adult. Like, when adu...
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Line 5, column 1344, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...cold then. In the same case young would got a comparatively more excuse than the ad...
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Line 9, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , young
...ore excuse than the adult. Secondly,young people have lot of previliges in our so...
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Line 9, column 381, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... car to visit temple. In that moment, I has to pay only half of fee as comparision ...
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Line 9, column 438, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Here
...alf of fee as comparision to my parents.Here, my parents have saved two-hundred fift...
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Line 9, column 484, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'rupee' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'rupees'.
Suggestion: rupees
...my parents have saved two-hundred fifty rupee, as the total fee of cable-car was five...
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Line 11, column 170, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are lots'?
Suggestion: there are lots
...uses as compared to adults, and because there is lots of previliges for young people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2301.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 481.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78378378378 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86695969687 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492723492723 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 723.6 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6003584229 160% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.161130924 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7272727273 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5757575758 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21212121212 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137766049404 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385673075513 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372612707105 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856618350571 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453729338391 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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