Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The way people dress is a good indication of his or her personality or character.
In the modern society, people have various choices of dress and it becomes a way to express themselves. Thus, the phenomenon ignites public debate about whether the way people dress can indicate their character. From my perspective, dressing reflects one's personality, since it can represent what his or her job is, and how he or she thinks about themselves.
First and foremost, the way people dress can illustrate their job. In specific fields, workers are required to dress in uniform during worktime. Meanwhile, most companies have rigid rules about employees' dress. As a result, people can make a basic conclusion about one's job through what they wear. For example, a doctor is often white-coated, police are always dressing in a brilliant police uniform and a judge dresses himself in judge clothes. A job is able to be a reflection of one's character due to the fact that those who choose the job have something in common, such as doctors are usually more patient and cautious, policies tend to have more courage. Therefore, to some extent, dress can reflect one's character.
In addition, dressing is a mirror to reflect how people think about themselves, which is also an indication of their personality. people would prefer those clothes to suit their temperament as well as to become a person whom they want to be. Hence, it offers some clues about what an individual thinks about. For example, a person dressed in traditional clothes, like han suit in china, represents his love of the traditional culture and the country. most people wearing han suits are associated themselves with china and have a high self-identity of Chinese traditional culture, such as peace and love. Under these circumstances, people can convey their personality by the clothes they wear.
Admittedly, I concede that sometimes, people are forced to follow strict rules about wearing clothes so that it is hard for them to show their personality by dressing. For instance, when attending a formal situation, most people are required to wear western dress and leather shoes. Given the fact that most people look the same, it is difficult for people to distinguish each person according to their dress. However, a part of people will wear accessories like watches, rings or necklaces, which also represent character. Even we can draw a conclusion that those people without accessories prefer simple and tend to follow rules directly.
To put it in a nutshell, the way of dressing reflects one's job and thought about themselves, which is a good method for others to indicate their personality and character.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2179.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 427.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10304449649 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75317617469 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498829039813 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9529542478 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0454545455 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4090909091 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260939764678 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878080417274 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527774035391 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172000843118 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395592487908 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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