We are in an age that everyone in society needs to have a career. The statement above said that young people should try to vary in different careers before they work forever in the same career. This argument has lots of benefits, in this writing, I will mention part of them.
Firstly let us take a look at the personality perspective if they search about work and try a lot of them. They will communicate with other types of people, so, that will provide them with new characters may be good or bad. To expand in this point, some careers are depending on the teamwork, so, people can earn from this work how to be cooperative with other workers; due to the cued society can help to be an extrovert person and learn how to communicate.
Another factor that is considering is education and experience. Many university students work part-time after them Permanence. To earn experience in the work, and they usually work in the same their apartment approximately. To have a range of information about their study practically. However, from this step, they will be ready for their work in future from the practice.
The third important factor is the business side when young people determine some works that want to be in them. They will earn money to create for them their own business, that will help them in future life. On the other word, before they graduate they will have money to build their future with their certification. And some of the student with the medium income work in part-time to pay them on their study.
After has been discussed above, it is useful for the young to try some types of careers before they select the eternal career.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Line 7, column 322, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ir future with their certification. And some of the student with the medium income work in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69178082192 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47972639064 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496575342466 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2924853416 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.625 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193303064348 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713513676629 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917325714739 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136499374062 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749881953615 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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