do you agree or disagree with this idea? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very a few things well.
In this competitive world, it is inevitable for people to do their best to be successful. Thus, most of the people busy themselves with a variety of tasks. There is a debate between individuals that if someone has the ability to do different things at the same time and with the best result. I believe that it is very rare and most of the people are not multi-tasking. Following paragraphs are clarifying my idea.
First of all, it is true that some people have the ability to be multi-tasking and can do different duties at the same time. However, most of the people cannot do it well. They lose their functions under high pressure of various tasks. For instance, I have a friend who starts to cry whenever a situation gets tough. She cannot manage her time to do several things at the same time. Ones she had an exam and at the same time, she supposed to complete a project at work. At last, her employee became discontent and also she failed at her test.
Secondly, some people can do several duties at the same time and in high quality. However, it is superficial to think that they are good at this job. In fact, they ignore some other aspects of their lives. Let take my aunt as an example. She is a single mother who works hard to keep living. At the same time, she decides to get an MSc degree in her major of study. Everyone thinks that she is successful in life and is able to do different jobs simultaneously. although, I think she sacrifices her health to this aim. She takes Xanax every night before sleep and rarely enjoys her life. she does not exercise at all and does not have a healthy lifestyle. To be happy and healthy is a very important task in life which she ignores and I know that she will lose her health for being multi-tasking at her business life. as a result, it is not correct to say that such people do all of their jobs perfectly.
in conclusion, it is terribly hard to do various tasks at the same time perfectly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.391184573 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4981775871 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471074380165 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1296996074 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.76 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.52 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212296820895 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746991647506 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722323984094 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164019236644 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073245180553 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 11.7677419355 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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