Internet has been the substantial part of today's population. It has abridged the distances between the countries and people. It is one of the main reason for the globalisation and advancement in the living style of world's population. It has its good and bad consequences but its positive features overrule the negatives. Imposing too much tax and price hike in internet service have made the use of internet expensive. So, I believe internet should be like other services, such as roads, and government should provide it to the public with no cost. There are diverse reasons advocating free internet which will be beneficial for every walk of people.
First, internet has been used as the study tool and for the research activities. With the advent of technology, studying pattern has been highly modified. For younger children, it can be taken as the source of teaching and learning tool via graphics and knowledge of the latest findings in their subject matter. In the same way, there have been distant education and internet based courses where students need not join the traditional classes. Instead, they get to study through internet and do their researches. This has been fruitful and time saving for the students who do full-time jobs or who live in distant. For an instance, studying MBA online, scientific journals etc. Therefore, if internet is made available free of cost, it will be encouraging students to learn and do self study irrespective of apprehension about getting out of money.
Second, internet has been the source of worldwide communication. People are able to communicate to new people through different online application such as facebook, viber, instagram, wechat, LinkedIn, twitter etc. They are able to share their views with each other and stay connected. They are aware of pressing issues in the world through online news portals such as bbc, cnn, enews etc. It has been life changing experience for people with the application of internet. Even businesses are done online making several pages or websites where people can get the things of their choice in one click. For example, alibaba, amazon, daraz etc are few of the online shopping applications. Thus, if Internet service is provided with no cost, it will be accessible to everyone and people can utilize it.
Third, internet has been the entertainment provider. Most of songs, shows and movies are premiered on internet. This has been the sole source of recreation for people. In the same way, the talented people neither need television nor radio to broadcast their talent. They can showcase it in youtube where their videos are viewed by millions of people and make them star overnight. Many new singers, dancers, rappers, vloggers, actors, etc are mushrooming from internet. For instance, if anyone is willing to show his singing talent, he can simply record a video and upload it in youtube. This is a simple way to get recognition and fame. Hence, internet will simplify the lives and increase more internet users and aspiring stars if it is made available everywhere free of cost.
In conclusion, making internet as other services will help people use it more often. In other hand, if internet is provided in limited access with internet security then misuse of internet can be abbreviated. Internet is significant in everyday life so, it will be great relief if it is provided free of charge. People of every generation such as younger children to elderly people enjoys using internet as the source of entertainment, education, knowledge and information. Similarly, it is the key role of government to provide internet to everyone free. If it cannot be made free of cost, internet has to be maintained with the low price possible so that it can be affordable to everyone.
- Do you agree or disagree Internet should be like other services such as roads and government should provide it to the public with no cost 86
- TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
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- TPO-34 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.U 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the living style of worlds population. It has its good and bad consequences but i...
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Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to tool'
Suggestion: to tool
... as the source of teaching and learning tool via graphics and knowledge of the lates...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the songs') or simply say ''Most songs''.
Suggestion: Most of the songs; Most songs
...et has been the entertainment provider. Most of songs, shows and movies are premiered on inte...
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Line 9, column 572, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ternet to everyone free. If it cannot be made free of cost, internet has to be ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, similarly, so, then, therefore, third, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 15.1003584229 252% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3157.0 1977.66487455 160% => OK
No of words: 624.0 407.700716846 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05929487179 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99799879888 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72814546442 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 212.727598566 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49358974359 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 994.5 618.680645161 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6003584229 184% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2349838347 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0789473684 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4210526316 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92105263158 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.88709677419 327% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285711207002 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712445264551 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123506434724 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174763948261 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103249966281 0.0645574589148 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 86.8835125448 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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