Do you agree or disagree? It is better to relax through watching a film and reading a book than doing physical exercises?
No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that the enhancement of the complexity of the world and tasks has played a predominant role in exhausting people during the day. They are faced with different challenges; thus they need to spend adequate time to comfort and relax. Not all people can concur when this issue arises. To being cognizant to the logic behind those who repudiate or endorse the legitimacy of this contention, not having any biased perception, I presume that exercising and sports is a more proper way for relaxing than staying at home and do some activities such as reading or watching movies. Among a plentitude of reason in support of this assertion, healthfulness and finding new friend could be picked out for further analysis.
To commence with, a consensus has yet to be reached; however, regarding the importance of exercise on human’s health and their lifetime, based upon the statistics of different general questionnaires in sundry countries, people are unanimous about this conviction that today’s life depends on machines and robots. Therefore, people are work in offices with low activities, and they are challenged with out of the maximum amount of sugar and lipids. Exercising give them the chance for being active and regulate their body. A vivid example can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above. The results of a study carried out by Rice university’s graduate students unveiled the fact that about 70 percent of U.S officers in a specific office of tax have the over range weights which decrease their performance and health.
In addition to the reason raised above, improvement of friendship and finding new friend could also substantiate the justifiability of the claim made at the outset of this essay. In conjunction with public belief, today's communications among people are more complicated because of decreasing the trustworthy and reliability in the societies even though humans are social animals; therefore, humankind seeks to find situations for making new friendships such as participating in some group exercises and sports teams. To elucidate on, in exercise people could be familiar with others and their cultures. Furthermore, it helps them to broaden their horizon, and release their stress from exhausting days of work and studying. For instance, I go to the park near my flat and do some exercises. It has a beautiful path for jogging and hiking and I could find to talk with people which make me feel happy and lively. In addition, I could find new friends which are professional basketball players and teach me many things in play in a team.
Drawing upon the reasons, discreetly put, as far as my personal perspective on the topic is concerned, I reiterate that people should attend to some sports activities for unwinding and relax instead of staying at home. Not only does exercise increase people’ health but also it helps them to find new friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2470.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 487.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07186858316 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69766713281 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88795439012 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570841889117 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 764.1 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.4709942538 48.9658058833 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6315789474 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0802021446417 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0251593769827 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424913813577 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532912294004 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348867973062 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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