Do you agree or disagree? It is better to use your own knowledge and experience to solve problems than to ask other people for advice.
To begin with, the experience is the most important and precious things which cannot be obtained easily. In fact, most people try for a long time until to reach an important experience. Hence, we could readily benefit what other learned in their lives without spending a great deal of money, and consume our time making a great plan to ensure our success. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. There was a time that I decided to apply for university abroad and I do not enough information to increase my knowledge about that university. one useful way was to move that country and live for a short period of time, but my father told me that it is better for me to surf the internet to and use the experience of a student who experienced the same situation. I did latter way because it was cost-effective and time-saving. For this reason, using others advice enable us to make a better decision without spending a hoard of time.
Secondly, when people have a problem, they cannot concentrate on their issues well. Under this circumstance, using others advice can help them enormously and effectively. In order to prevent a stressful and nervous situation, it is better that people ask others to find a great solution to solve their problem. In addition, nowadays, there are a lot of mental and physical diseases deriving from the stress and tension. For example, when I was an undergraduate student, I had a part-time job at university campus magazine as a reporter. As I remember, one time, I interviewed professor Nejati, who is a well-known psychologist in our country about the effects of students' performance when they have problems. He told me that, a high percentage of student who has a problem are the ones who become nervous due to lacking experience to solve their problem. He recommended that to eliminate stressful situation it is better for them to refer the consuler of university because they are skillful enough to assist them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...ase my knowledge about that university. one useful way was to move that country and...
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Line 3, column 617, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... move that country and live for a short period of time, but my father told me that it is bette...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82456626815 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559523809524 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3733789322 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225224748103 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071418136044 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601003023915 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175081615902 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.000243036819516 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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