Do you agree or disagree? People gain more happiness from their jobs than their social life.
From a broad perspective, in the current states of affairs we face, in which happiness can be accounted as the ultimate goal for most of the people, it is not far-fetched to presume that they are seeking to achieve it through diverse approaches. However, which of those attitudes does offer more practical way is considered as a contentious issue. There is a growing segment of people who contend this idea that their job brings more joyful for them rather than their social life. I personally concur with this idea and in the ensuing paragraph the rationale behind this stamen will be further elaborated.
First and foremost, the life of the most of the people has been dedicated to their job. There is no denying the fact that getting a decent job is of the great importance for a plethora of people. Indeed, they usually take accurate steps with the aim of raising their chance to find the proper job. For instance, having enrolled in the best high school, they can get admission from a reputable university. When this milestone passed, they can apply for the vacant positions and the more qualified they are, the better job they can acquire. Therefore, it is not surprising if they immerse themselves in their work that they make sever effort to obtain it. Subsequently, this cycle last for the rest of their lives to promote and earn salary raises and so forth. In this circumstance that people spent virtually all of their life to accomplish career succeed, they attain remarkable pleasure from their triumph.
Another crucial point which should be taken into consideration is that social life can be subcategory of professional life. Undoubtedly, being sociable () is an integral feature of prosperous individuals. Actually, they are aware of this fact that their accomplishments in their jobs, to the great extent, is dependent to their relationships with other people. Consequently, rarely do people encounter a successful person that cannot establish constructive relation with others. Thus, due to this interconnected link among these two concepts, if people enjoy their job, they can be happy in their social life as well.
To wrap it up, it is more judicious to say that happy life evolve from having satisfying job. Actually, people not only most of the occupy most of their lifetime with their job, but also they cannot distinguish the matters of job and social life owing to fierce connection between them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...remarkable pleasure from their triumph. Another crucial point which should be ta...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sional life. Undoubtedly, being sociable is an integral feature of prosperous ind...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... job. Actually, people not only most of the occupy most of their lifetime with their job, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98765432099 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71010123088 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550617283951 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1642462953 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.315789474 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3157894737 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38034462773 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127996014226 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10808778143 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267876971442 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507653737568 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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