Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , is
Progress,is one of the things which makes us notice...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'awarded'.
Suggestion: awarded
... progress and secondly its good to have award after achieve some target that it was i...
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Suggestion: .
...rything around us is because our develop . We are the most intelligent creatures o...
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Suggestion: .
... everything to achievement of new things . Constantly . But this is in our DNA. We...
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...o achievement of new things . Constantly . But this is in our DNA. We are born – a...
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.... We are born – and we learn how to walk ,talk go to study, work . Searching for b...
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...earn how to walk ,talk go to study, work . Searching for better opportunities . I ...
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...ork . Searching for better opportunities . I have to admit that my opinion on this...
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...s wanted to achieve new goals in my life , so far. Progress gives us so many thing...
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...is world because of medicine achievments . Likewise, it is good to award you...
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...icine achievments . Likewise, it is good to award yourself when you achieve ...
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Suggestion:
... achieve your goals. And that's why progress is even sweeter. From my point ...
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...s after every time you achieve something you wish for. I could give an example –...
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...g you wish for. I could give an example – in every persons life after graduating...
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...or. I could give an example – in every persons life after graduating from high school,...
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...as a celebration that it is called prom.It is celebrated because the student is r...
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...rom.It is celebrated because the student is reached some point of his educational...
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...the light of the above mentioned reasons,I believe progress is always good.First...
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...ove mentioned reasons,I believe progress is always good.Firstly, we all have the...
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...mentioned reasons,I believe progress is always good.Firstly, we all have the pri...
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Suggestion: Firstly
...ons,I believe progress is always good.Firstly, we all have the privillage to live in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, second, secondly, so, i think, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66993464052 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64770081219 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.7029869684 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0588235294 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186003900998 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573868077479 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681869248024 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140600424524 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735343991411 0.0645574589148 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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