Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Some people claim that progress is not always good and one should have a stable life after one point in life. There are things in life in which one should not progress like gambling, cheating etc, however I feel that if pointed in the right direction progress always allows oneself to achieve the goals they desire and gives them the motivation to do so. I strongly agree that progress is always good and will provide two reasons to prove my viewpoint.
First of all, progress helps a person to become financially independent and also helps to fix any money related household problems. For example if someone is earning a decent wage and is barely able to support their family and the tuition fee of their children then progress is certainly important to them. With progress they can get a promotion, impress their boss and get a pay rise also. The following changes will result in them being able to provide more for their family. They would be able to fight inflation also without having to worry about their savings. If they had been stuck on their position with no progress they would not have been able to properly educate their children and provide for their wife. So going forward in life in very important and it can have a huge impact on your close ones.
Second of all, if there was no progress people will lose motivation to work. For instance if a student is working on a project and according to him he thinks that he is not able to yield any output then he will not be motivated enough to pursue it anymore. On the other hand if his parents give him a placebo by telling him that he is progressing, he will tend to be more motivated to complete the project which might result in him actually progressing. The idea of progress works to bring perserverance in a person and propels them to push forward, without visible results ones motivation tend to die down.
Lastly, some might argue that when you get older you tend to require a balanced life and not one which is hectic which can be one consequence of progress, since for progress to happen one needs to put effort. But I disagree with the fact that old people should have a stable life, For example the inventor of Kentucky Fried Chicken came up with the recipe of the famous fried chicken when he was almost sixty years old. Had he been relaxed and not give in the hard work at that age there would have been no urge for him to invent such recipe and the famous chicken we have would not have even existed.
In conclusion, I strongly contend that progress is always good and one should not be afraid to put in the hard work required alongside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
..., impress their boss and get a pay rise also. The following changes will result in t...
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Line 5, column 575, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...o push forward, without visible results ones motivation tend to die down. Lastly,...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'disagree that'.
Suggestion: disagree that
...o happen one needs to put effort. But I disagree with the fact that old people should have a stable life, F...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, then, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2149.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51470588235 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28845744161 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47268907563 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6145260465 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.388888889 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161246842429 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563071172585 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598739895796 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985541510855 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635169272723 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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