Do you agree or disagree with the statement: It is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than save money for the future.
In modern days, money plays an important role in everyone's life. People don’t use their money just for their necessities like food, some are of the opinion that they must spend the rest of their money on traveling and vacation, some others save them for the future. I, personally, subscribe to this idea that it is better to save money for the future. It is a proportion of all individuals' lives to encounter with some emergencies like illness, and also all of us have some demands all of which cannot be fixed just with our salaries only if we collect some portion of them during months.
In first place, human beings from children to adults are imposed to many unpredictable occurrences like illness, car accidents and so on some of which sometimes are costly, so accordingly those people that have not saved enough money will not be able to afford such an expense. In these situations, they will experience a tough time because of not only the happening event for them, but also lack of money. In such a stressful condition, they have to look for somebody to borrow money from him or her. If they even can do so eventually, their stress and concerns will not be disappeared soon because after that they need to whether work harder in comparison to the past or reduce their cost and following their level of lives in order to repay his borrowed money. In contrast, individuals that have always saved money, they will not experience such a hard time. Their chance to pass occurrences without serious risks are more than before-mentioned people because they will have the required money, so accordingly not only they can handle such a happening, but also they will get less stress.
Secondly, nowadays, human being are in the demand of many things else besides their primary demand like food, clothe and so forth like having car and house. Bachelors live with their parent, even there are some among them that become independent of their parents, but when they want to get married, they need a house and even a car to have an easy life. It is right that during the first years of their married lives they can rent house, and use public transportation, but it is a common goal among people to buy their own house and car all of which require a bunch of money. The most reasonable way to meet such a goal is saving money during our lives. In contrast, individuals that have always saved money, they will not experience such a hard time. Nobody in their right mind cannot say that he didn’t have a happy life, but are there any one to deny that he has surely gotten many problems because of the lack of his own self-house, not renting?
Nobody in their right mind cannot say that he didn’t have a happy life, but can anyone deny that he has surely gotten many problems because of the lack of his own self-house, not renting?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...event for them, but also lack of money. In such a stressful condition, they have t...
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Line 4, column 843, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...apos;t have a happy life, but are there any one to deny that he has surely gotten many ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2339.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 505.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63168316832 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74048574033 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4421742921 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437623762376 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0689656381 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.588235294 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7058823529 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188513960734 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877806860851 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811191483062 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118204088717 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945198163489 0.0645574589148 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 11.7677419355 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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