My mother says "if children have read books i.e. parents have read book of life". In school we learn the science but we can't learn the way of life. We can learn the way of life by experienced old persons. they can teach by their experience.
Maximum persons accepted that so many things can not be learned in school e.g. I learned cooking from my mother who is uneducated, driving from a uneducated persons.
Wise persons can never teach these morals. When any person is completed PHD they feels proudy themselves. It doesn't means all educated persons doesn't have morals
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: maryam1370
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
.... In school we learn the science but we cant learn the way of life. We can learn th...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l we learn the science but we cant learn the way of life. We can learn the way of...
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Line 1, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...way of life by experienced old persons. they can teach by their experience. Maximu...
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Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...not be learned in school e.g. I learned cooking from my mother who is uneducated, drivi...
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Line 2, column 145, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... mother who is uneducated, driving from a uneducated persons. Wise persons can n...
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Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'person'?
Suggestion: person
...s uneducated, driving from a uneducated persons. Wise persons can never teach these mo...
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Line 3, column 43, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e persons can never teach these morals. When any person is completed PHD they feels ...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
.... When any person is completed PHD they feels proudy themselves. It doesnt means all ...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ed PHD they feels proudy themselves. It doesnt means all educated persons doesnt have ...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s. It doesnt means all educated persons doesnt have morals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 52.1666666667 17% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 483.0 1977.66487455 24% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 100.0 407.700716846 25% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.16227766017 4.48103885553 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43431715271 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 212.727598566 33% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71 0.524837075471 135% => OK
syllable_count: 140.4 618.680645161 23% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6619968444 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.375 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.6045352989 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.45110844103 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170912427598 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862649162103 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673216341102 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125042570919 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075647103067 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 86.8835125448 21% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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