Do you agree or disagree with the statements Children should not be allowed to play the video games
Taking care of our children is in our own hands as we know they are not well aware of the pros and cons of things they do.I am totally agree with the statement that playing computer games is waste of time and children should not be allowed to play them with below three reasons.
Firstly ,playing computer games has many disadvantage including leading factors of no body activity/movement.Playing games include no body movement: it can be played by just sitting on the chair and laying down the bed.This actually causes laziness in the body and demotivates kids to play outside which include more fun activities.For instance , if a kid is just playing video whole 2-3 hours and on the other hand a kid which plays football on ground ,who have good health: definitely the football kid.Computer games doesn't lead to any benefit for health.According to the survey taken by WASA on world wide from last 5 years , it is shown that obesity if 47% increased in kids due to no body activities in their daily routines as children are more attracted to mobile or computer games.Therefore , playing computer game doesn't have any health benefit for kids.
Secondly, the major problem which is now days caused by computer games is severe impact on eyes of kids.Due to pandemic from last two years , students attending classes through mobiles,tablets and computer: they are already spending 3-5 hours daily on electronic gadgets and the adding the computer games can damage their eye sight.It is studied that now days 6 out of 10 kid have glasses from the age of 5-6 years , this is because of excessive usage of gadgets which is leaded by attractive video games on it.Therefore , if children should not be allowed to play them.
At last , playing computer games on daily routines could be addictive to children.Playing new games daily , let the kids to make them addiction for it.For example, i have a niece of 5 years who plays many video games and she is so addictive to it now that she eats food while playing game only , she plays game while eating which causes her losses concentration for food ,also she eats food for like longer time so that she can play meanwhile. Therefore , addiction make hings bad in kid's life , video games should not be allowed.
In conclusion, many will argue that few hours of playing doesn't harm anything , but as we know these are kids and they not much aware of long tern damage from it.So playing computer games is a waste of time and should not allowed to play.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73842592593 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73746692109 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497685185185 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 622.8 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.1344086022 358% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 252.925548993 48.9658058833 517% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 341.166666667 100.406767564 340% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.0 20.6045352989 349% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.3333333333 5.45110844103 446% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 42.0 5.5376344086 758% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334835933611 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203718840702 0.076458572812 266% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793639105637 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213518530155 0.150856017488 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860876416356 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.9 11.7677419355 314% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.32 58.1214874552 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 10.1575268817 286% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.4 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.0537634409 306% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.247311828 303% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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