Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
some people say that the internet provides people with lots of valuable information, Other thinks access to so much information creates problem.
Undoubtedly, internet is one of the crucially important invention of human being which makes possible most of inevitable things for us. Although, there are the great number of people who believe that internet creates problem, I personally do not agree with them. There are three main reasons to show why I have this preference.
First and foremost, by using internet, doing research with scientific purposes became very easy and available. In the past, before inviting internet, researchers and students should spend lots of their valuable time in finding proper information in libraries, despite the fact that, finding especial data in some fields was too difficult or impossible. For example, as I remember when I was studying master in university, I was able to access all of papers which had been written before me about that subject and I used them in order to carry out my research to write papers. Without internet such a big research would be inconceivable.
Another prominent reason is that, internet provides all people with lots of information in all fields from a household woman to a writer or a professional doctor in a way that everybody access to whatever ones need. For instance when I want to cook a new food, I surf the net and find a delicious new food to cook or when I want to go shopping I search about the shopping centers and their prices to find reasonable price for shopping. In fact, it is possible for all classes of people to access special kind of information according to their requirements.
Last but not least, I think that with the possibility of learning about news online, people themselves, can check if something they have heard is true or not, especially by using prevalent social networks which every day lots of wrong news about celebrities or politicians are spread. I myself, every morning check news online in several websites to distinguish which one is true.
To sum up, although, misusing internet could cause lots of problem, it provides us with vast range of worthy information in all context and makes us possible to access to resources of information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'delicious new food'.
Suggestion: delicious new food
...ook a new food, I surf the net and find a delicious new food to cook or when I want to go shopping I...
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Line 5, column 52, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of problems'.
Suggestion: lots of problems
...although, misusing internet could cause lots of problem, it provides us with vast range of wort...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in fact', 'kind of', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230179028133 0.229887763892 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.153452685422 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0971867007673 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0255754475703 0.046263068375 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0690537084399 0.0685040099705 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140664961637 0.118717715034 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0383631713555 0.0351676179071 109% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77344933421 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0409207161125 0.0309702414327 132% => OK
Particles: 0.00511508951407 0.00188951952338 271% => OK
Determiners: 0.0639386189258 0.0887237588012 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0127877237852 0.0209618222197 61% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0230179028133 0.0139019557991 166% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2106.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 356.0 408.028673835 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91573033708 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342696629213 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26404494382 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207865168539 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120786516854 0.112833075102 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77344933421 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 65.9859641885 59.2087087015 111% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 27.3846153846 20.5533526081 133% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6401570883 48.84282405 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.0 120.699889404 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3846153846 20.5533526081 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.644075263715 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 53.7891097666 45.7405998639 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.64948453608 1.45489161554 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350804422572 0.300154397459 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0920092447245 0.103427244359 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0671609879223 0.0752933317313 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.588900625499 0.497263757937 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.197428418109 0.151897553556 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134287786462 0.114077575197 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927387203888 0.0781384742642 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.185681936946 0.336927656856 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0854713504823 0.067059652881 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212309984763 0.210909579961 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576560325696 0.0618886996521 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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