Do you agree or disagree that students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past?
As the revolutionary idea that students should communicate with their teachers equally becomes increasingly prevalent, some students, especially those in middle school and high school, behave somewhat improperly with the existence of their teachers. However, these behaviors cannot be taken as disrespect and students, in fact, show respect to professors as much as they showed in the past.
It is common nowadays that a small group of junior students misbehave in class and seem to show limited respect to their teachers. Some students may put their foot on the table, call their teachers by first names, and argue with teachers on class topics. These behaviors may seem to be presumptuous or rude to some people but are actually the signs of their independence and self-identity. If a student only knows to memorize knowledge taught by teachers for the memorizing’s own sake and treat teachers as gods, is he or she able to argue with teachers on whether it is possible to travel through black holes? Therefore, we cannot infer that students do not respect their teachers only from their misconducts.
In fact, people’s respect for teachers, the crucial source of knowledge, has never changed in human history. Giotto, the most important artist in the middle ages and renowned for his revolutionary paintings that show the human side of holy figures, was born in a remote mountainous village in Italy. Despite the amazing gifts in painting, Giotto had had no chance of becoming a successful artist until Cimabue, his teacher, found him drawing vivid and realistic images of sheep on rocks when he was grazing and asked him to be his apprentice. It was Giotto’s teacher who made Giotto a great artist who helped begin the Renaissance. Giotto treated his teacher with full respect until the last moment of his life. Just as Giotto is grateful to his teacher Cimabue, Jack Ma, the co-founder of Alibaba and one of the wealthiest entrepreneur, feels thankful to his teacher in Hangzhou Normal University because of the inspirations of the Internet offered. Jack Ma highly respect his teachers and even donated 100 billion RMB to the university he graduated from.
As indicated in the previous discussion, it is not only an individual action but also a societal tradition that students respect their teachers sincerely. Though the societal structure has changed tremendously in the past hundreds or even thousands of years, the level of respect students show to their teachers is always the same.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
...e the amazing gifts in painting, Giotto had had no chance of becoming a successful arti...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1564792176 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84883571339 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540342298289 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4469059101 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.8125 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5625 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218931003944 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783082182569 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564215312569 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138688734783 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402236012746 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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