Do you agree or disagree to take challenging classes or easier classes in university.
It is critically imperative for students to take courses that would benefits them after completing their program at the university. Honestly; I believe students should always go for cheaper courses when studying at the university.My decision is based on the following reasons, which I will develop in my body paragraphs.
To begin with, selecting cheap classes during one’s study makes it easier to achieve good grades, which in turn put one at the edge of getting a good job.To explain broadly, when we opt for easier courses, we are more likely to be moltivated and put all effort towards achieving the best grade.All in all, this as well makes it easier to secure good job since most companies tend to base their recrutiment criteria on good grades.However, taking difficult classes could cause numerous problems such as getting poor grades, lowering self -esteem and also making it difficult to get employment. For instance, when I gained admission at the University of North Carolina, we were given syllabus that entails all the required courses needed to graduate from the pharmacy program.In the beginning, I had difficulty understanding the syllabus because I felt I need to take all the courses listed however I realized I was to pick just five classes out eight.Luckily, those classes I picked were the easiest of all and as a result, I end up ahieving A’s all through my stay. After completing my program i started searching for job online.Fortunately, I came across a pharmaceutical company that needed pharmacist so i quickly send my Cv down.In fact, I received their employment offer ten minutes after i sent my Cv.When I actually show up, the manager told me that what actaully made me suitable for this position was due to the fact that I had good grades in school.If I had achieved poor grades, obviously i wouldn’t qualify for the position.
Furthermore, easier classes can be fun.To be more specific , it is unlikely for someone to be put to sleep.In fact, such classes lighten the class room atmosphere because it is always more of an interactive sessions where both the students and the professor contribute to the topic being discussed.For example, while I was attending those classes, I never yawn neither do i sleep because the class is always full off energy.In addition, both the students and the professor share their views towards the subject being discussed.
In light of the reasons mentioned,I believe that students should always take easier courses.This is because it makes it easier to achieve good grades, and also makes the class to be more exciting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, honestly, however, if, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2173.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04176334107 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88072263257 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547563805104 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.1344086022 303% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 178.315473707 48.9658058833 364% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 310.428571429 100.406767564 309% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.5714285714 20.6045352989 299% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 23.5714285714 5.45110844103 432% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.5376344086 795% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182071275899 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861595156777 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672119571949 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118684783506 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590970433792 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 11.7677419355 281% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 58.1214874552 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 10.1575268817 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.01818996416 132% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 10.002688172 185% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.0537634409 263% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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