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Television is really had bad influence
Television really had bad influence
They don't even realizing what is happening
They don't even realize what is happening
we never allowed to do any calculations using calculators
we are never allowed to do any calculations using calculators
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Sentence: Second, the technological advancement made our kids life lazier than ever before.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to kids and life
Sentence: They are doing everything by using their fingers only, their mind power is weekening everyday. when I was a kid, we never allowed to do any calculations using calculators, everybody used their mental ability to do the calculations.
Error: weekening Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 404 350
No. of Characters: 1895 1500
No. of Different Words: 217 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.483 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.691 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.666 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 63 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.16 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.154 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.271 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.447 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.164 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5