Do you agree or disagree: The technology will greatly affect the quality of life of ou next generation.
Our world has been experiencing both positive and negative changes in all aspects of life. Most people blame the contemporary technology for the appearance of some global problems, and are strongly of the opinion that its adverse impact on the future generation is inevitable. However, when it comes to me, I belong to the other group of people, who state that technology will mostly benefit the future generation, rather than do them harm. I will explore the reasons for my standpoint in the following body paragraphs.
To begin with, living in the 21th century, we are now inundated with hair- rising technological inventions, which, in turn, considerably releases us from many of problems and troubles. At this rate, the future generation will definitely be provided with more opportunities. The technology will become the integral part of every aspect of life, able to significantly boost the development of those areas. For example, the refinement of robots and artificial intelligence will open new doors to more discoveries in the science, space, industry, education and communication. So, the future generation will apparently have the opportunity to easily travel through the space, fly with special devices, use some gadgets to make their work easier and to transport from one place to another just in few minutes.
Secondly, the quality of life is improving due to the new developments in medicine. With the flow of time, the most incurable diseases from the past, can be easily fought via new medical solutions. Therefore, in the future, some diagnoses, such as cancer, will no longer be a concern of any patient, as the way to treat it will already have been discovered by the scientists or maybe robots. And this is not from a science fiction story, as now robots are capable even to perform operations and create 3d organs for people. So, people will no longer suffer from long- lasting pains and health problems and will be able to always remain healthy. What is more important, I do believe that some time in the future humanity will also have devised a method to stop their growth at a particular level and stay always young.
Admittedly, there will also be some problems related to global warming, pollution, but I do believe that these will become possible to eventually solve and prevent from happening, as the humanity is growing smarter and smarter with the time. Moreover, people now are inclined to make eco-friendly devices and technologies, such as hydro-electronic cars, alternatives to plastic, smart homes and effective transportation systems.
In the light of these reasons mentioned, I am strongly of the opinion that our current lifestyle will have mainly a positive impact on the future generation and will improve their life to a huge exntent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, such as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2345.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13129102845 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86402918423 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560175054705 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.679217902 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.277777778 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3888888889 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16771253997 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556168026952 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404089177371 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983531651926 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023802482666 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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