Do you agree or disagree in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today

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Do you agree or disagree, in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.

Technology is advancing day by day and it will never stop advancing. The prompt states that there will be fewer cars in feature. In my not so humble opinion, I mostly disagree with the statement rather I think that in feature there will be more cars for following reasons.

To begin with, people now a days are more attracted towards the speed and luxury and car is an asset which have both so it is plausible that in feature more luxuries car will be made. For instance, one can exemplify, everyone have dream to buy the luxury car or sports car in their bucket list so it blatant that car industries will not be faded in coming years rather it will flourish more and more new cars will come in the market.

Moreover, as the technology is improving car companies are involved in making more futuristic car to entice more and more customer. For example, Tesla is the most futuristic car at this very movement owning car like Tesla or any other good modern car now a days has become prestige point in the society owning the good car indicate success level in the society so it is blatant that in feature more and more cars will come in the market.

Finally, everyone likes to be behind the powerful machine. Everyone like to control powerful machine so it will be not apt to placated that in feature there will be less number of cars. Rather considering this point more high-tech car will be made to entice the customer. More companies will fight in this field to launch their product successfully in the market. For example, new companies will be born trying to establish their empire in this world and in such competition more cars will be made.

In conclusion, technology will improve in every field including cars so it is blatant that there will be more cars in feature.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'luxuries'' or 'luxury's'?
Suggestion: luxuries'; luxury's
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Message: Use past participle here: 'dreamed', 'dreamt'.
Suggestion: dreamed; dreamt
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...like Tesla or any other good modern car now a days has become prestige point in the societ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6144200627 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37205289958 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445141065831 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7499973864 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258119081499 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13170459382 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664504473496 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187786012922 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392123839115 0.0645574589148 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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