Do you agree or disagree that a university notices some first-year students have poor studying skills. Some in the university believe all first-year students should be required to take a course on studying skills, but others don’t agree. What’s your opinion?
Nowadays some universities start to concerned about the first year students who have poor studying skills and have difficulty facing and dealing with piles of homework and presentations from school, in order to solve this problem universities open up a class especially for the freshmen which can help them immediately getting used to the college life and schoolwork. However, in my opinion, I disagree with this statement, and I will go into detail in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, not getting used to the teaching style and studying skills of college is every freshman’s difficulty in part of the process of becoming the college students. it is inevitable that we all face this kind of situation once in our life time, therefore we have to find a way to solve it, not depends on the school.
Secondly, it is the concern about the adaptability of school, every freshmen should conquer it by themselves not just wait for the help of school.
In short, it is everyone’s responsibility to solve this problem; it is not about the school, it is about the mindset of us.
- TPO-40 - Integrated Writing Task 88
- TPO 41 Integrated essay 85
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People learn things better from those at their own level, such as fellow students or co-workers, than from those at a higher level,such as teachers or supervisors. 60
- Do you think that students today are more interested in politics than in the past 52
- Do you agree or disagree that young people enjoy life more than older people do 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ocess of becoming the college students. it is inevitable that we all face this kin...
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Line 2, column 241, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...face this kind of situation once in our life time, therefore we have to find a way to sol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in short, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 1977.66487455 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 407.700716846 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93989071038 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98175446428 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 212.727598566 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.2581719156 48.9658058833 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.666666667 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5 20.6045352989 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6666666667 5.45110844103 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162571977223 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654260729466 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689270306746 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806211466263 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682100982345 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 11.7677419355 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 86.8835125448 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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