Although some people believe that what people dress can be a good sign of their personality, I firmly cocur
with the idea that the way people dresses can not demonstrate his or her personality. In what follows, I will
aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that in some schools or organizations, individuals are required to
wear similar formal clothes. In fact, all the persons on that schools or organization have the same clothes.
So, there is not any way to realize the personality of different people in that siuations. In the other words, in
such a situation, one may cannot know who the peson is, let alone figuring out his or her personality.
Although some people may argue that the personality of people can be found by observing the color of
individuals dress in view of the fact that different color has varied meaning which enable us to realize the
personality of persons, but recent studies, conducted in our country shows that the kind and color of a
dress which sombody put on have nothing to do with his/her personality.
In approaching this issue, apart from the fact mentioned above one should regard another subtle point
meticulously that people wear different clothes in different ocassions. In other word, when someone wants
to got to the work, he/she should wear formal clothe such as suit. However, when that person is invited to a
party, he/she wear casual clothe. Accually, hardly has anyone been known that he or she put on same
clothe in different locations. Although the supporters of the opposite viewpoint are of the opinion that no
matter where someone go, he/she are willing to put certain type of clothe, I believe that it is not a substantive
evidence. Notheworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics shows that the type of clothe that the people prefer
changes when they grow older.
Taking all aforementioned arguments into accounts leads us to the conclution that ther is no link between
one's personality and what he oe she put on. In some situations people are required to wear simalar
clothes, and they wear different clothes in different locations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, apart from, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17877094972 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78495962715 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516759776536 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.4325430091 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.6 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.53405017921 485% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 36.0 5.5376344086 650% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203079526034 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633225641376 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806328644521 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587845483653 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711470884945 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.