Do you agree or disagree
with the following statement?
Taking a lot of time to make an important
decision is often considered as a bad
quality for a person. However, some people
think that it is a good quality for a person.
I believe we should deliberate the consequences of the decisions we would make before we settle down the choice, especially when it matters a lot to us. In daily life we would meet lots of decisions everyday. The choices are significant because they would affect us in many mays where we could not predict what will happen later. Thus every time we should be cautious of the decisions, it is proper for all of us to think again the result of the choice we make. Thinking a lot of time is a good quality for a person. I will discuss my view there in after.
To begin with, important decisions would affect our life with no exact prediction we can make. Once I was making decisions on which major I should choose before entering the university. Although I was fond of learning English, my father told me that foreign languages like English are the tools for people all over the world to communicate. He suggested me that I could develop the hobby of Learning English when I was learning my major. With a deep consideration of mine, I chose Machenichal Engineering as my studying major. Meanwhile I took part in the English club in my university. Then I continued my hobby of learning English. Several years later, I found that the deliberately consideration of choosing major was helpful, I really benefit from the choice I made because it brought me lots of offer from several major factories in China.
In addition, as we could not predict what will happen if we make certain decision, we should think of all the possibilities behind these important choices. The more we could profigure, the more precisely we could make the choice. Because these decisions are important to a person, it is a good quality to reconsider the matters what would happen. Especially in Business, there are so many event prior our preparation. Once I was organizing a business meeting, when I was preparing the speech for my bosses, I could not fortell who will read this speech, because there are two bosses in my company. So I wrote two different drafts. So no matter who would be on the stage, my draft would be suitable for himself. After the meeting , I was praised by both of my bosses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ly life we would meet lots of decisions everyday. The choices are significant because th...
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Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...uld not predict what will happen later. Thus every time we should be cautious of the...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e with no exact prediction we can make. Once I was making decisions on which major I...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to communicate. He suggested me that I could develop the hobby of Learning Engl...
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Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...ichal Engineering as my studying major. Meanwhile I took part in the English club in my u...
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Line 3, column 713, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to major'
Suggestion: to major
... deliberately consideration of choosing major was helpful, I really benefit from the ...
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Line 3, column 794, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun offer seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of offers'.
Suggestion: lots of offers
...the choice I made because it brought me lots of offer from several major factories in China. ...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ajor factories in China. In addition, as we could not predict what will happen...
^^
Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Because these decisions are important to a person, it is a good quality to recons...
^^
Line 5, column 392, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'events'?
Suggestion: events
...pecially in Business, there are so many event prior our preparation. Once I was organ...
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Line 5, column 731, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... suitable for himself. After the meeting , I was praised by both of my bosses.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, really, so, then, thus, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65454545455 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68813063983 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490909090909 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7773114313 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4545454545 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108547705638 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043827504839 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897338343459 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838350068673 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429227759585 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.