Do you agree that people easily learn from the friends beside them? Use specific examples and evidences to support your answer.
Nowadays, people normally accept the truth that friends can affect on each other in different situation, although some people have opposite opinion about this statement and declare this is not correct idea. In my opinion, friends definitely imitate each other. That is due to having an enormous time that they are together, in addition their interests is the cause of emulate with friends and understanding the different points about each other.
First and foremost, when one spend a specific time with another person, probably they mimic from each other. Otherwise, the mind of people without intention initiate to imitate from person that they are living with them. For example, When I was student at university, I became familiar with a person. He was an addict. After several months I were addict due to I did not aware about the aftermath of my work. I has found that the friends have a immense effect on our activities.
Second, a person is enthusiastic about doing the work that their same aged do. In other words, when they see some activities from their friends, they easily learn that and repeat in another situation. For instance, sometimes you have friends that they are attractive; hence, you try to repeat their work. I have a friend that he was a music player. I begin to play music due to emulate with him.
Finally, the friends usually know the characteristics of their friends; therefore, they will be able train their friends from corrected method. To put it differently, when you are aware about the weak point of a person, you can using his power points to make something easier for him. As an example, I have a friends that their score in his course was low; therefore, I decided to solve his problem. As we were intimate together, I understood the weak point of him; hence, I had try to train him from the way that there were not his weak point.
As outlined above, it is obvious that friends are closer to each other rather than others; thus, they can affect each other easily. That is because of spending time together is the major cause of imitating, moreover, people always are keen on doing the behavior of friends and friends are aware about the properties of each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...mally accept the truth that friends can affect on each other in different situation, alth...
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Line 2, column 319, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...miliar with a person. He was an addict. After several months I were addict due to I d...
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Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...e was an addict. After several months I were addict due to I did not aware about the...
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Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'addicted'.
Suggestion: addicted
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Line 2, column 411, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...aware about the aftermath of my work. I has found that the friends have a immense e...
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Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...work. I has found that the friends have a immense effect on our activities. Seco...
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Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...out the weak point of a person, you can using his power points to make something easi...
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Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a friend' or simply 'friends'?
Suggestion: a friend; friends
...g easier for him. As an example, I have a friends that their score in his course was low;...
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Line 4, column 479, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'tried'.
Suggestion: tried
...ood the weak point of him; hence, I had try to train him from the way that there we...
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Line 4, column 479, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tried'.
Suggestion: tried
...ood the weak point of him; hence, I had try to train him from the way that there we...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ay that there were not his weak point. As outlined above, it is obvious that frie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76240208877 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45287998004 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483028720627 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3867790199 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.15 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168095485579 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538105180092 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381712726313 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982386303605 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239667540356 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.