Do you agree that you can purchase everything from a large store than purchasing things from the shops which are specialized in those products?
In the recent decade, people at large have been preferring to visit large stores as it helps them to shop everything they need daily, under one roof. Additionally, large stores offer lucrative discounts at a certain time of the year. No doubt shopping from large store help in saving both time and money. Yet, whenever we want to purchase an exclusive product, we end up rushing only to a specialized shop. Hence, I beg to disagree that one can purchase everything at a large store. In what follows, I'll note down a few points to explain the reasons behind my stand.
To begin with, large stores lack variety and diversity of a particular kind of product, unlike specialized shops. Let's compare two well-known stores here. D-Mart, which is a large departmental store and Sephora, which only targets selling beauty and makeup products. The range of beauty items in D-Mart is pretty slim. Though we can find beauty items of daily use, the variety of products is nothing in comparison to what Sephora has to offer.
Secondly, since specialized shops earn their main revenue from a specific type of product, they are bound to maintain the standard and quality of items. Otherwise, they'll fail to survive in the market. For instance, the products present in a large store are the ones that are advertised to the general mass. Their quality can be termed as 'basic.' But a shop, let's say one that only specializes in selling candles, will have customized and handmade products in their collection, which tend to exclusively of high quality.
Last but not least, it is a popular belief that a brand name adds value to the products. We want to purchase a product from a specific brand, definitely go to the brand's store directly. Personally, for example, when I know that I want to purchase a blouse of Chemistry brand, why should I go to a large store and confuse myself trying to search my choice of the brand out of all the other products?
To conclude, specialized shops can at times prove costlier than our general large stores. Yet, it is often hard to compromise with the products that we care for. And not to forget that the after-sales service from any specialized shops will always be multiple steps ahead of large stores, especially because of the difference in the number of customers they need to entertain.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 401.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79301745636 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5777479604 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546134663342 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.820911554 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3636363636 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2272727273 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348407825315 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954043771817 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668180400625 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185716303814 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458015993464 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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