Nowadays there are uncountable number of famous people in various fields, such as art, music, film, technology, business or so on. Even some celebrities are famous all over the world and known by millions of people. At that time, their behavior, style and other things about them are considered by the society. Many people assume that we should pay attention to their opinions. Because they best at their field and their ideas can be useful for everyone. If it comes to my opinion, I totally disagree with this statement. In this essay, I will discuss about this idea and expand my opinion afterward. Famous people are ordinary like someone else. Their ideas are different from others for sure. However, to say that their ideas are better or we should follow them is not a good idea. It is wrong to agree that since such ideas are good for famous, they will be good and useful for us. Because there are some other aspects that we should consider that too. Luck! Sometimes they get some chances which make their life completely different from ordinary people. Therefore, I think that following our own ideas may be better for everyone. On the other hand, if the opinion of the celebrity is something of worth, they are likely to keep it for themselves, not to spread it all over the world. Because they have a lot of enemies and many people who want to be better than them. Furthermore, celebrities can also make mistakes. They are also human and we know that there were many famous and rich people who have lost their fame and end their lives in a miserable way during the history. In fact, if we consider this on the other hand, we cannot say that it is completely bad. Because there are many people that they acknowledge celebrities as a role model for themselves and try to resemble them. As a consequences, most of the time it encourage and motivate children when they are choosing their profession. In conclusion, although celebrities play an important role in every society, their words and attitude cannot be trustful. Considering everything I mentioned above, we can emphasize that celebrities are ordinary people like others living on earth and due to their living condition and personality, we cannot trust them without any doubt.
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...people who want to be better than them. Furthermore, celebrities can also make m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, even so, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77577319588 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49922269774 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1005683123 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5652173913 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8695652174 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204786845571 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658995754478 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077107931753 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204786845571 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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