Earlier people consumed healthy foods than today, do you agree or disagree on the same , give examples and details for the same.
I strong believe that earlier people used to consume lot more healthy foods than today.In previous years people had frequent access to natural food ingredients,which weren't chemically treated.Furthermore,the cost of these foods was not very high .At times people used to grow fruits and vegetables in their backyard,people consume these foods which are not chemically modified to stay healthy.
Our world has developed a lot more since then and food industry is no behind. Food industries in urban areas have introduce the concept of instant foods or ready to eat foods . No doubt, these food packages are very convenient not when there is a shortage of time. In cities as people are very busy in their lives have hardly time to prepare meal, for such people the instant foods come to the rescue. But are these instand foods prepared strictly using natural ingredients? The ans to this question is very evident.Inspite of all these cons people are still continuing to consume modified foods.
Another example I would like to mention is about kids.Nowadays kids are completely devoid of nutritious value , as the food they consume is processed food. When I was a kid i used to drink milk fresh from the cow everyday to keep my immune system strong to fight against any germs.Since many years milk is considered to be a good source of nutrients and proteins . But in recent years the milk is being processed resulting into losing its nutritious value.Considered these facts , nowadays due to week immune system kids pays more frequent visits to a doctor.On the other hand ,adults like me doesn't even need a doctor to stay healthy. Though causes for this are varied and many.
Food is an integral part of our life. Foods are primary source of proteins , vitamins and other essential sources which help our body to keep away from any diseases and maintain our health. However, if the basic food resources we consume is adulterated is there even a point to go to a fancy restaurant and order a fresh salad? Is that even healthy? Is that even worth your health?
In conclusion, I would like to say that provided we consume more of natural resources which our Mother earth offers us , we will be succeeded in living a healthy and disease free life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84856396867 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78829193889 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548302872063 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.633220255 48.9658058833 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.235294118 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5294117647 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194908187514 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625462711054 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535171547986 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107168045795 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648758351243 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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