Education is a paramount part in indifidule live. It is very important o get a future job. universities have a responsibilty to provide a perfect a cademic classes for their students. some universities believe that sports and social activities are as important as other classes like libraries and should receive egual financial support. other have opposit opinion. However, some believe, math, science lab and libraries are very important for education process. In my opinion, I concur with statement, that social activities and sports are very important for students. I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view in the subject.
In the begining, social activities help student to broaden their horizon. Students need these activities to communicate between them. increase their skills and experience. This is a compelling example from my real live. when I was in the dental collage. I take music class because, I really like to play on pino. In my class I meet a new friend from other major. we practice togather and spent very amazing time. We share our skills and experience, therefore, I reay appreciate that class which gave my chance to make a new friend. As we can see the importance of thses classs for social communication.
Furthermore, sports are important for students health. as we know all students busy with their academic classes, so, they do not have time to go to gym or do any external excersice. when universities support these activities as a part of their progrom help student to save their time and money because , we all know how students have limited budget.
In conclusion. This statement is as persuasive as it stands, this is based on my exposition that mentioned above. sport and social activities important to help student communication and for improve their health state.
Education is a paramount part in indifidule live. It is very important o get a future job. universities have a responsibilty to provide a perfect a cademic classes for their students. some universities believe that sports and social activities are as important as other classes like libraries and should receive egual financial support. other have opposit opinion. However, some believe, math, science lab and libraries are very important for education process. In my opinion, I concur with statement, that social activities and sports are very important for students. I will elaborate on a couple reasons to explain my point of view in the subject.
In the begining, social activities help student to broaden their horizon. Students need these activities to communicate between them. increase their skills and experience. This is a compelling example from my real live. when I was in the dental collage. I take music class because, I realy like to play on pino. In my class I meet a new friend from other major. we practice togather and spent very amazing time. We share our skills and experience, therefore, I realy appreciate that class which gave my chance to make a new friend. As we can see the importance of thses classs for social communication.
Furthermore, sports are important for students health. as we know all students busy with their academic classes, so, they do not have time to go to gym or do any external excersise. when universities support these activities as a part of their progrom help student to save their time and money because , we all know how students have limited buget.
In conclusion. This statement is as persuasive as it stands, this is based on my exposition that mentioned above. sport and social activities important to help student to communicat and for improve their health state.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Universities
...t is very important o get a future job. universities have a responsibilty to provide a perf...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...portant o get a future job. universities have a responsibilty to provide a perfec...
^^
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...t a cademic classes for their students. some universities believe that sports and so...
^^^^
Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
...should receive egual financial support. other have opposit opinion. However, some bel...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plain my point of view in the subject. In the begining, social activities help ...
^^
Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Increase
...activities to communicate between them. increase their skills and experience. This is a ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...a compelling example from my real live. when I was in the dental collage. I take mus...
^^^^
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a compelling example from my real live. when I was in the dental collage. I take mus...
^^^^
Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...s I meet a new friend from other major. we practice togather and spent very amazin...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thses classs for social communication. Furthermore, sports are important for st...
^^^
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...orts are important for students health. as we know all students busy with their ac...
^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...go to gym or do any external excersise. when universities support these activities a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ent to save their time and money because , we all know how students have limited b...
^^
Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sport
... on my exposition that mentioned above. sport and social activities important to help...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at and for improve their health state.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0297029703 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84694398043 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541254125413 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8000349012 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2608695652 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1739130435 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4910050946 0.236089414692 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125076541282 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120001319568 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272452705566 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17493641385 0.0645574589148 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Universities
...t is very important o get a future job. universities have a responsibilty to provide a perf...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...portant o get a future job. universities have a responsibilty to provide a perfec...
^^
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...t a cademic classes for their students. some universities believe that sports and so...
^^^^
Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
...should receive egual financial support. other have opposit opinion. However, some bel...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plain my point of view in the subject. In the begining, social activities help ...
^^
Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Increase
...activities to communicate between them. increase their skills and experience. This is a ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...a compelling example from my real live. when I was in the dental collage. I take mus...
^^^^
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a compelling example from my real live. when I was in the dental collage. I take mus...
^^^^
Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...s I meet a new friend from other major. we practice togather and spent very amazin...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thses classs for social communication. Furthermore, sports are important for st...
^^^
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...orts are important for students health. as we know all students busy with their ac...
^^
Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...go to gym or do any external excersise. when universities support these activities a...
^^^^
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ent to save their time and money because , we all know how students have limited b...
^^
Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sport
... on my exposition that mentioned above. sport and social activities important to help...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at and for improve their health state.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0297029703 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84694398043 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541254125413 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8000349012 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2608695652 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1739130435 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4910050946 0.236089414692 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125076541282 0.076458572812 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120001319568 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272452705566 0.150856017488 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17493641385 0.0645574589148 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.