employers should be required to provide smoking areas for their employee who smoke cigarettes?
Nowadays, there are a lot of people who addicted to ciggaret and they need to smoke it while they are working in office. On the other hand, others, who do not enjoy it, hate to be in a place full of smoke. There is a suggestion which proposes devoting a particular section of each office for the people who like to ignite their ciggarate. Personally, I concur with these suggestion cause it is benefitial for both sides, smokers and non- smokers. I will mention two reasons, both of which will be mentioned in following essay.
To begin with, smoking is not enjoyable that much if you use it when you are alone,according to smokers' claims. Most of the smokers indicate the fact that they like to use it while they are talking with others, since it helps them to feel relax and regain their energies to be prepared for resuming whatever they was doing before. I remember 3 years before, when I worked in a compony, we had a such room in our institution. Co-workers who enjoy to ignite their cigarate gather there and talk about different topics and it affected their behavior in a good way they was relax all the time, in addition, it had uncountable effects on our office's efficincy.
Secondly, besides the previous group, we have many people who hate smoke, not anly do they not want to use it, but also they hate to be faced with it's smoke. having a seperated room for smokers is a brilliant idea to respect the others and I believe this is founders of the company's duty to build such space. There was a survey in my country regarding this matter, in which scholars studied on employees of two companies. The fisrt one has a smoking room, however, the other one did not assign any room for smokers. They especially record the workers performance, how efficient theyare. The results showed that the fisrt company has much better outputs.
To make the lonf story short, according to the aforementioned arguments, having a smoking room has numerous effects on the persons who enjoy it and who hate it. as we know the more relax employee are, the much better performance they will show.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this suggestion' or 'these suggestions'?
Suggestion: this suggestion; these suggestions
...ir ciggarate. Personally, I concur with these suggestion cause it is benefitial for both sides, ...
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Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , according
...at much if you use it when you are alone,according to smokers claims. Most of the smokers ...
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Line 2, column 440, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy igniting'.
Suggestion: enjoy igniting
...room in our institution. Co-workers who enjoy to ignite their cigarate gather there and talk ab...
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Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relaxed'.
Suggestion: relaxed
...d their behavior in a good way they was relax all the time, in addition, it had uncou...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...o they hate to be faced with its smoke. having a seperated room for smokers is a brill...
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Line 3, column 544, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...for smokers. They especially record the workers performance, how efficient theyare. The...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61290322581 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52381992494 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7875268032 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.941176471 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22871436033 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713774865133 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543095055189 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152909444491 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345875585666 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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