The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In recent modern society, more and more human beings begin to give up for their initial goals when facing with the cruel realities. The obligations on our shoulders gradually add weights, pressures of maintaining a family’s life or such things, make us can not breathe. It is similarly that no longer easy for us to insist on our original intentions. But, as to me, I simply convince that we should not stop struggle for our goals.

Firstly and foremost, we are born to live for a life. Without your goals, some of us would be alike just alive. There is a saying like that “We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars.” Your goals are powerful mental strengths to motivate you going ahead. Though it would be difficult to fulfilled, but it is danger for someone who loses it. Without an ultimate goal, one’s life would like a boat lost in the sea.

Futhermore, the process of pursuing for a goal is a path of self-awareness for individuals as well. It is easy for a start to make a goal, but the most important period is to rush in the end. Persistent is an essential key, but what is more, you should rethink and adjust yourself to your goals, or you should adjust your goals up to your substance.

The last but not the least, the ones who give up at the middle of the period because their goals are too abstract, without specific details. To divide one’s goals into tiny steps is beneficial for achieving to it ultimately.

All in all, our goals are mentally resources inspirit you ; during the process, it could also advance your self-awareness. Some of us give up because they do not know how to refine their goals. You should not discard your goals in any circumstances.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, similarly, so, well, as to, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 309.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61812297735 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6584422688 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546925566343 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4963855631 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9411764706 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211559064695 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700181208002 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385665025125 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124259129868 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212642912673 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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