Should we keep trying and never stop working for our goal? People express disparate opinion on this. From my perspective, I agree that we should not stop working for our goals in as much as the following reasons.
First, that “Never, never give up” provides the second chance for any people and it is a way of success. Anyone can be became the failure in the first trial, however, when that person do not lose his confidence and goals, certainly he will be the successful person. For instance, let take the example of my, when I failed in intermediate level, I did not lose the goal but I gave the exam two times and at last, I passed the intermediate level. In addition, after that the hope and goal provides success in Bachelor level.
Next, that statement not only provided the second chance, that we don’t disappointed even we become unsuccessful. It provides the courage of the unsuccessful person. For instance, when peoples do not get that interested job, then they disappointed easily. But, the persons which have the opinion that we never stop working for goals, then do not disappointed, they try to another company or sector for their job.
Further, from the continuous effort to get the goal, they can learn a myriad of experience, and knowledge when they continuously effort their job. Their goals surely becomes well planned and advanced goals. For example, when I want to became the professional cricket player, at first, I did not have any good skill to play the game, even local clubs did not select in their tournament. However, I continuously played the game, and I totally concentrated on the cricket game and improved my skill, today all the clubs including national level select me to play the game.
In conclusion, we should not stop our goal in as much as, it is the way of success, we do not disappointed and our skill and experience can be advanced.
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- Some parents forbid young children from owning smartphones (cell phones with Internet access), while others disagree and believe that they are important tools for keeping in touch. Which point of view do you think is better, and why? 70
- Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved theway people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Should we keep trying and never stop wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81402439024 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68634586745 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509146341463 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8545566665 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243767235231 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881403562005 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121642806339 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140066927405 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.092529790451 0.0645574589148 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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