The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past
In every decade family is the important issue to deal with. Since the world is changing upon on technology, the combination between members in a family is not as strong as before. Although, some people doesn’t believe this fact, in my point of view family extension has less value today. In this passage, I will mention some of the reasons to prove this idea.
To begin with, people have different ideas from their parents because of their conventional ways in life. for case, they can’t induce themselves to stay together. For example, a fellow with thirty years’ old who wants to have girlfriend without parent’s permission which doesn’t match with family’s criteria since they have different thoughts.
Secondly, active life and not having sufficient time cause to alter the fact of reducing family extinction value. individuals utilize to work since morning till night and holidays they need to chill out with companies instead of family so the way of living make things change. For instance, a guy who is employee and try to earn money, and enjoy his life, and work hard from Saturday till Friday, as a result, They incline toward spending that one day for themselves, not family.
Thirdly, living far a way from family because of many reasons such as job can cause family members get far away from each other and day by day relationships get lighter. Thus, families and other relatives cant see each other and follow traditional aspects of the family. For example, these days no one get permission from their grandfather to get married because they are not in same region and they don’t leave in same building as before.
To sum up, Although respecting to family extension is very important but these days we see many elements which are affecting this important issue in life which I think I help people to be free base on their thinks and believes and no one can force them to follow the old and tradition conventional ways .
- Tpo10 63
- People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do 70
- Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 65
- tpo41 integrated writing 80
- People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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... the old and tradition conventional ways .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87951807229 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49559125729 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569277108434 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5058136915 48.9658058833 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.714285714 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 5.45110844103 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.090451600555 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368185191494 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035801336155 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055305743342 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318741040575 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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