The extended family (Grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.
With the increasing globalization of the world and people seeking new opportunities in developed countries, I believe our extended family's relatives are every day less important than in previous years.
When our children go to college they seek independence, they want to find what life is all about when living on their own. Hence, they start losing contact not only with their own parents but also with the rest of the family. On the positive side, our children develop from an early age a sense of independence, they get ready to face the world for themselves. On the other side, this feeling of independence takes them away from close family members.
Moreover, once our children graduate from college or university, the most likely they are to continue their life on their own away from their extended family members. For instance, new job opportunities abroad will give the opportunity to settle down in faraway countries with foreign spouses and children of their own. Not like in the old days, where most of the families stayed in one place and most married people from around the area and grew their family close to other own relatives.
Lastly, families are becoming further apart. Gone are times when we used lived close together in the same house with our parents until we were almost adults. Nowadays relatives are living halfway across the planet and most of the time we are too busy even to place a phone call to our close ones.
Therefore, I believe our extended family has lost its value that used to have in older days. There is less communication going on between them and us
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82909090909 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4719089555 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570909090909 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4520752121 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103142065302 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440695395071 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522299881086 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790335337487 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641185763355 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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