In the modern era, the family is regarded as a crucial factor contributing to the thriving of people in individual and social aspects of their lives. One of the heated debates in this realm is associated with the importance of our relatives in our lives. Some people adhere to the view that grandparents had more pivotal roles in the past, while others believe they play more profound roles in contemporary time. Ego, when it comes to my stance, by weighing up various facets, I firmly hold that the extended family is more important now. In what follows, I will cogently pinpoint my most conspicuous reasons to justify my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that families have become less crowded in comparison to the past, so the links between the members have become stronger. Since people used to have many children, it was hard to be acquainted with all of your aunt's and uncle's kids and stablish connection with each of them. However, we are exposed to fewer relatives now, which introduces us to more quality time to spend with each of them. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I am the only child, and I have a cousin who does not have any siblings as well. When we go to each other's houses, we spend most of our time talking about different matters, and we are incredibly intimate. On the other hand, my mom does not even know the name of some of her cousins because they are too many to be remembered.
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that less populated family increases the duties of each member so that sometimes they need assistance from outside to aid them in their responsibilities. Two or three decades ago, parents could go out to do their jobs and gave the responsibility of taking care of the kids to the older ones. However, now, they have to rely on their close relatives to babysit for them. For instance, when I was a kid, because of some financial problems, my mother could not afford to send me to kindergarten. So, she put me at my aunt's house every day for almost seven years while she went to work. In fact, during those days, I was in touch with my aunt and cousins more than my mother so that my cousins were more like brothers and sisters to me. Thus, not receiving my aunt's help, we could not survive that predicament.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that nowadays, the extended family has become more accentuated in our lives than before. This is because families with less population can not resolve some of their troubles on their own, so they need extra assistance. Besides, the lower population gives us more opportunities to be intimate with our relatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in brief, in fact, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67782426778 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63955725035 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529288702929 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.62639007 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.636363636 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7272727273 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.45110844103 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191273067775 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481051094298 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563135205497 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116244104416 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302187832473 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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